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- Whispers of Love -

I see my reflection wraps in your beautiful eyes You undress me and love me to heavenly heights Cheek against cheek we merge the dream that embraces all of me Currents of longing searching through the night where pulse live like waves on the sea Deep in your eyes nothing affecting my heart stronger than the touch of your hand You stand and stare out to the horizon close your eyes and dream about the holy land It is not always what you say with words that matter most - a glance is often enough Two that dream away from reality a little hour or more engulfed eternity a bluff Soft silluetter the nervous velvet meet in soft kiss - I was lost in a veil of moon dust Such deep longing pick me apart - we both know - that our hearts are crushed 05.04.2014 A-L Andresen :) Contest Name: Whispers of Love Sponsor: Gail Angel Doyle Deadline: 4/27/2014 (1th in the contest)

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Date: 2/2/2015 1:22:00 AM
This is so very beautiful.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/2/2015 3:07:00 AM
- Rachel, thanks for the visit and lovely comments on my poem - Whispers of Love - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/4/2014 6:09:00 PM
I love it!!! your poems are great and inspiring :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/5/2014 3:32:00 AM
- Thanks for visiting and comments from you Claudine :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/3/2014 9:18:00 PM
Your words pick me up and carry me long..thank you Anne :0
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/4/2014 2:33:00 AM
- Craig, thanks for the visit and lovely comments on my poem - Whispers of Love - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/29/2014 7:48:00 PM
Dear Anne, thanks for the welcome to poetry soup. And thank you for the walk through the thoughts behind love. Whispers Of Love is a moving poem.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/30/2014 2:54:00 AM
- Robert, thanks for the visit and lovely comments on my poem - Whispers of Love - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/24/2014 3:56:00 PM
wow, priceless piece Anne...a fusion of paasion and affection.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/24/2014 4:10:00 PM
- Phillip, thanks for the visit and lovely comments on my poem - Whispers of Love - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/23/2014 9:53:00 PM
Congrats on the win my friend!!!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/24/2014 1:25:00 PM
- Thanks for your visit and congratulation ,Robert :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/22/2014 4:17:00 PM
so lovely, love romantic poems
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Date: 5/22/2014 4:17:00 PM
so lovely, love romantic poems
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/23/2014 12:11:00 PM
- Dear new friend Diane, thanks for the visit and lovely comments on my poem - Whispers of Love - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/20/2014 8:28:00 AM
** very lovely and beautiful**.... Congratulations on your high win... It's an honor to be with you in cloud 9 ,Anne... I still can't find the way down to earth... lol... Thanks a lot for sharing us your wonderful poem... ^_^
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/20/2014 8:35:00 AM
- Thanks for your visit and congratulation , dear AiyaH :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/20/2014 7:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your top podium win, Anne Lise :) A romantic write, verging on the sensual; love your whispers:) // paul
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/20/2014 8:03:00 AM
- Thanks for your visit and congratulation - A pleasant surprise, Paul :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/20/2014 5:48:00 AM
Wonderful Anne lise,,, loved this beautiful romantic write whisper soft ,, congrats on huge win !
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/20/2014 8:02:00 AM
- Thanks for your visit and congratulation - A pleasant surprise, Dr. Upma :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/19/2014 7:31:00 PM
This is quite beautiful A-L. I don't know how I missed it the first time..Congratulations on the win...hugs Tim
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/20/2014 2:43:00 AM
- What a surprise .... thought this contest was judged long time ago ... (and my poem was not on the winning list) - Thanks for your visit and congratulation - A pleasant surprise, Tim :)))) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/19/2014 6:37:00 PM
Congratulaions my friend on your win with such a beautiful poem " the distance between eyes can never be measured "
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/20/2014 2:42:00 AM
- What a surprise .... thought this contest was judged long time ago ... (and my poem was not on the winning list) - Thanks for your visit and congratulation - A pleasant surprise, Frederic :)))) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/19/2014 5:40:00 PM
This is a beauty, Anne Lise! Truly enjoyed, "Sister"! My congratulations on your wonderful win! Love and hugs, Annalise
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/20/2014 2:41:00 AM
- What a surprise .... thought this contest was judged long time ago ... (and my poem was not on the winning list) - Thanks for your visit and congratulation - A pleasant surprise, "sister" Annalise :)))) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/15/2014 12:30:00 PM
Hi Anne, Thanks for your comment on my poem. Your poem Whispers of Love is one that true lovers can relate to. Keep up the good work!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/15/2014 12:51:00 PM
- Al, thanks for the visit and lovely comments on my poem - Whispers of Love - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/7/2014 4:46:00 PM
A reflection of magnificent beauty cast in a sincere heartfelt song!! O' what memories it must bring to great romantics that enjoy reading it ..
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/8/2014 4:13:00 AM
- Dear new friend Robert, thanks for the visit and lovely comments on my poem - Whispers of Love - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/20/2014 9:11:00 AM
i love the poem Anne, it's beautiful :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/20/2014 11:52:00 AM
- Tonya, thanks for the visit and lovely comments on my poem - Whispers of Love - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/16/2014 3:31:00 AM
Oh Anne , this is very very nice indeed :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/16/2014 3:33:00 AM
- Dear friend Debbie, thanks for the visit and lovely comments on my poem - Whispers of Love - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/14/2014 5:41:00 PM
Anne, I love this post in rhyme. I write mostly in rhyme and can really appreciate the talent that produced it. I find there is strength in subtlety. Really a fine read. I'm glad to be back..... Love ya.... Jake
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/15/2014 3:01:00 AM
- Welcome back, John !!! - Thanks for the visit and lovely comments on my poem - Whispers of Love - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/14/2014 5:02:00 PM
Gosh dear you are a good writer. this is brilliant, and the style is so unique> #RESPECT you sister
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/15/2014 2:59:00 AM
- Thanks for the visit and lovely comments on my poem - Whispers of Love - Ncumisa. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/13/2014 12:32:00 AM
I like the unusual style for this exciting poem. "We both know that our hearts are crushed..." theres a lot of meaning in that line. Total love. J.A.B.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/13/2014 6:40:00 AM
- Thank you for, "look deep in my lines" - (some "read" only for post a comments!) - Much appreciated your visit - thank you Justin !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/10/2014 4:35:00 AM
Dear Anne, This one is full of passionate love feeling, Making the heart beat fast . great description of love feels. Thanks for your reading my poems so carefully and extracting their feels.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/10/2014 4:43:00 AM
- Thanks for the visit and lovely comments on my poem - Whispers of Love - V P. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/9/2014 9:13:00 AM
Sad but still beautiful write!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/9/2014 10:52:00 AM
- Carol, thanks for the visit and lovely comments on my poem - Whispers of Love - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/9/2014 7:26:00 AM
Romantic and lovely words. Your images and poignant glances are wonderful.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/9/2014 7:27:00 AM
- Hi Monterey, thanks for the visit and lovely comments on my poem - Whispers of Love - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/8/2014 8:52:00 PM
WOW i can hear the romantic heart of the poet speaking through these lines of beauty and romance. Great job here so beautifully done, I'm glad you enjoyed my poem also thanks so much for your great comment. cheri
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/9/2014 2:55:00 AM
- Cherl, thanks for the visit and lovely comments on my poem - Whispers of Love - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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