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- New Spring -

Energy longing, harmony melting snow, heat, joy of life sunlight, sweet smelling, sprouts, birdsong grass grow, blue sky, beauty liberating, new hope happiness 17.04.2013 A-L Andresen :)

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Jatin Gauttam

Date: 6/18/2013 7:25:00 AM

I liked the piece you've chosen Anne. Really love the way you write.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/18/2013 7:29:00 AM

- Enjoyable with a visit from you Jatin, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/30/2013 3:13:00 AM

you took this form to greater heights, anne.. i like the melodic sound of this piece especially the alliteration, " sunlight, sweet smelling, sprouts.." marvelous!..:) huggs!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/30/2013 3:18:00 AM

- Enjoyable with a visit from you Nette, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Karen Anglesey

Date: 4/20/2013 6:59:00 PM

Very refresing and I love this style. I wrote one in this format a few years ago and didn't retain a copy (arghhh). Love this

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/21/2013 2:25:00 AM

- Enjoyable with a visit from you Karen, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

David Fisher

Date: 4/20/2013 6:03:00 PM

Such a nice simple description and shape...for the most enjoyable seasonal change of the year.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/21/2013 2:24:00 AM

- Enjoyable with a visit from you David, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Dalila Agtani

Date: 4/20/2013 9:48:00 AM

Hello A-L A well-written diamond-shaped poem. How are you? Nice to hear from you, thanks for your comments. Dalila

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/20/2013 11:30:00 AM

- Enjoyable with a visit from you Dalila, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun

Date: 4/20/2013 9:20:00 AM

A splendid poem with its great & wonderful image my dear friend Anne Lise! Thank you so much for providing me a wonderful vicarious experience through your outstanding Diamante poem. A great gem indeed! Thank you as well for enjoying my poem. I'm so glad you came along with me as I explore the paradise in the figment of my imagination ;)). Have a grace-filled weekend to you and your love ones! Big hugs! love lots, Leonora

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/20/2013 11:29:00 AM

- Enjoyable with a visit from you Leonora, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

John Loving Iii

Date: 4/20/2013 8:55:00 AM

This form should be called Ingredients.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/20/2013 11:29:00 AM

- Enjoyable with a visit from you John, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 4/20/2013 3:16:00 AM

Excellent. Simple and beautiful. Enjoyed. Tfs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/20/2013 7:14:00 AM

- Enjoyable with a visit from you Ravi, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Kirin Lawrence

Date: 4/20/2013 2:51:00 AM

A very myers briggs typology Se description visual all gorgeous like.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/20/2013 7:14:00 AM

- Enjoyable with a visit from you Kirin, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 4/19/2013 4:05:00 PM

A .lovely Spring poem I could almost see daffodils blooming amongst the lines. SuZ

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/20/2013 1:37:00 AM

- Enjoyable with a visit from you Suzanne, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Peter Dorr

Date: 4/19/2013 1:26:00 PM

Almost symmetrical in sight but Brussels (?) 'sprouts'?! In most of Britain including England they are correctly called 'Brussels sprouts', but a few English farmers call them 'English sprouts'?! Sprouts are like 'Marmite': you either love them or hate them. I love them - as long as they are not over- cooked! Anne Lise - what an optimistic poem for an English Spring clear sky at twilight!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/19/2013 1:47:00 PM

- Thanks for your visit and your comment - Wishing you a beautiful spring Peter! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Mustapha Maaroufi

Date: 4/19/2013 1:19:00 PM

all these are the gift of the spring. ?A nice words of a fine feeling.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/19/2013 1:22:00 PM

- Thanks for your visit and your comment - Wishing you a beautiful spring Mustapha! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Christine Phillips

Date: 4/19/2013 7:36:00 AM

Very beautiful Anne.This is what we all yearn for the sweet sensation of nature that comes with spring.Wonderful!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/19/2013 9:20:00 AM

- Thanks for your visit and your comment - Wishing you a beautiful spring Christine! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 4/19/2013 6:47:00 AM

Simply beautiful, Anne Lisa. Your formatting adds volumes to your poem. Nice one. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/19/2013 6:48:00 AM

- Thanks for your visit and your comment - Wishing you a beautiful spring Delysia! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 4/19/2013 6:43:00 AM

Spring is all this beauty. Everything comes to life. Thanks for sharing and have a great day.... Lucilla

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/19/2013 6:46:00 AM

- Thanks for your visit and your comment - Wishing you a beautiful spring Lucilla ! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Jayne Eggins

Date: 4/19/2013 6:39:00 AM

I really loved this one its autumn here so it will be a few more months before it gets warm again, I love the rhythm and pace :)thanks so much for your kind comment on my poem love JC x

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/19/2013 6:46:00 AM

- Thanks for your visit and your comment - Wishing you a beautiful spring JC! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Diane Christian

Date: 4/19/2013 6:27:00 AM

hi thanks for your kind comments on my poem sisters, its not always been like that i asure you, siblin rivalry goes back as far as cain and able and when josephs brothers threw him in a pait, i love my ssiters btu its not always ben plain sailing 2 of my sisters used to be real cruel to me but od gave me a heart to keep on loving Amen, i like you rpoem, i like the diamond shape, it resembles you perfectly a diamond to all who you know. your are encuraging love diane

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/19/2013 6:29:00 AM

- Thanks for your visit and your comment - Wishing you a beautiful spring Diane! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Daver Austin

Date: 4/19/2013 6:19:00 AM

Yes! All the things that make spring welcome. Love, daver

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/19/2013 6:22:00 AM

- Thanks for your visit and your comment - Wishing you a beautiful spring Daver! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 4/19/2013 4:11:00 AM

this is brilliant and really punchy... Love each lines~A.O

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/19/2013 5:12:00 AM

- Thanks for your visit and your comment - Wishing you a beautiful spring A.O! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Sukmawati Komala

Date: 4/18/2013 10:50:00 PM

hi dearest Anne Lise very sweet and beautiful wording <3 enjoyed so much ..<3 hugs and luv <3

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/19/2013 1:37:00 AM

Thanks for your visit and your comment - Wishing you a beautiful spring Sukmawati! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/18/2013 3:15:00 PM

Very descriptive of the season..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..THanks for stopping by..Your comments are always uplifting..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/19/2013 1:36:00 AM

- Thanks for your visit and your comment - Wishing you a beautiful spring Sara! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Painted Hunter

Date: 4/18/2013 11:53:00 AM

Howdy Anne, you sweetheart, you. Here's a form I don't think I've seen, and you nailed it!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/18/2013 11:54:00 AM

-Thanks for your visit and your comment - Wishing you a beautiful spring Caleb! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 4/18/2013 11:34:00 AM

wonderful description of spring Anne Lise...thanks for stopping by...hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/18/2013 11:43:00 AM

-Thanks for your visit and your comment - Wishing you a beautiful spring Joseph! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

David De La Croes

Date: 4/18/2013 5:23:00 AM

Your diamond reflects all the beautiful colours of the spectrum spring's joy! Thanks for sharing, Anne-Lise... David

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/18/2013 5:29:00 AM

-Thanks for your visit and your comment - Wishing you a beautiful spring David! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Timothy Hicks

Date: 4/18/2013 4:46:00 AM

It's so full of life and yet leisurely at the same time. I really liked Andrea's comment... it's what spring is all about!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/18/2013 4:54:00 AM

...true Timothy, my words are not set up totally random :)diamante poem is like a puzzle where each word must match.- -Thanks for your visit and your comment - Wishing you a beautiful spring Timothy! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)