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TITANIC Turbulent was not the sea, wonderful largest liner floated safely. Inspired by luxurious ocean voyage, affluent passengers sailed gaily. Tension-free vessel suddenly struck by hidden ice berg. Ship at stake. Abrupt rush of water flow flooded the deck causing ship wreck. Not enough life boats to accommodate each innocent helpless soul. Ill-fated Titanic sank. Most tragic event, just to count death toll. Captain Smith prayed till last breath. Titanic ! Ocean stole. 10/17/15 Re-Edited on 07/31/21 'A Brian Strand August' First Place Contest by Brian Strand '2022 Marathon Mile 8’ Contest by Mark Toney

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Date: 10/31/2022 2:08:00 AM
nicely figured out the TITANIC through the poetic diction by Acrostic Form; congrats for being selected the poem as POD
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Date: 3/12/2022 9:01:00 AM
Great acrostic.Congratulations!
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Date: 3/12/2022 3:22:00 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Date: 11/12/2021 1:53:00 PM
Nice acrostic and sharing the memory of the Titanic.
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Date: 10/10/2021 6:58:00 PM
Good work.Glad to know thay you still remember the disaster. I like the movie too.
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Date: 8/2/2021 7:00:00 PM
Anisha, this is a fantastic acrostic telling the story of the Titanic! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 8/2/2021 2:28:00 AM
A great description of The liner in acrostics. Beautiful Creation. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 8/1/2021 11:20:00 PM
Great imagery highlights your acrostic beautifully, Anisha, my compliments truly my friend, Aloha!
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Date: 8/1/2021 10:30:00 PM
Though Titanic sunk long back, it still remains immortal in a way, a good Acrostic and a worthy winner, congrats.
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Date: 4/12/2021 2:13:00 AM
By this acrostic beautifully delivered about the TITANIC
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Date: 4/11/2021 4:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your very explicit and true Acrostic regarding the sinking of the Titanic, Anisha. Take care, Shirley
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