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---dead chipmunk

dead chipmunk
black cat’s doorstep gift---
exit shriek

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  1. Date: 12/7/2012 3:21:00 PM
    Debbie, another good haiku... my son loves this one... i had a cat who enjoyed pouring these dead chipmunks on my

  1. Date: 6/29/2011 5:43:00 PM
    I had a grey cat that delivered a rabbit, Smoky went wild in the Aussie bush. like your flow in this one:) xo, Don

  1. Date: 6/29/2011 8:33:00 AM
    POOR chipmunk... :-) your haiku's are Love, Randa

  1. Date: 6/26/2011 5:45:00 PM
    haha Very well done my friend. Reminds me of the gifts of love my cat used to bring me. We must remember that when our cat does something like this it's a gift of love and we must not hurt her feelings about it. God Bless, JB

  1. Date: 6/26/2011 2:19:00 PM
    Yes, of course, my Lady is summer, and I was showing the three months of "her." WEll, when I go and do deep search, it asks for exact form and category and I cannot possibly remember all my poems and how I categorized them. I just don't see how you are using that search engine, Deb!!

  1. Date: 6/26/2011 8:52:00 AM
    Very nice..enjoyed.

  1. Date: 6/25/2011 8:45:00 AM
    really cute. More themes on dead animals. I like it. soupmail.

  1. Date: 6/24/2011 3:57:00 PM
    I KNEW I should have asked u first about that darn word but looked it up online dictionary and this is what it showed but did not look or feel right to me.. same thing with seguey but Nette set me straight on that one.. I used to get 100's in spelling long time ago.. oh.. time marched on.. thankxx Debbie..

  1. Date: 6/24/2011 2:02:00 PM
    LOL, I can imagine... we often hear our neighbour scream when her terrier drops a dead rat on her foot!

  1. Date: 6/24/2011 1:51:00 PM
    Good haiku, Debbie. Ah yes, my cat always remembers to leave me bloody, broken gifts by the back door. She is such a thoughtful provider :D

  1. Date: 6/24/2011 10:40:00 AM
    sad. poor little chipmunk..but Ill admit it made me laugh... BG

  1. Date: 6/24/2011 9:11:00 AM
    love the ending, debs!! .. oh, please read my " soup safari"; mentioned you with respect. hope you won;t mind; just for pure delight! :) huggs!

  1. Date: 6/24/2011 8:53:00 AM
    wow wonderful visual here Debbie ..lines of with plus.. good luck if for the new contest luv..

  1. Date: 6/24/2011 8:05:00 AM
    Ps. *^_#*

  1. Date: 6/24/2011 6:17:00 AM
    Aren't those cats great providers...Enjoyed your nature work..If for a contest, reads like winning material to me..Sara

  1. Date: 6/24/2011 6:13:00 AM
    Oh poor chipmunk :( xx