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---A Lonely Tower

a lonely tower on a rocky outcropping gold light pierces fog sailors raise a mug aboard the once doomed ship all mainsails unfurl Contest: In the Light of haiku Poet: D. Guzzi

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Kash Poet

Date: 9/10/2011 1:57:00 PM

Very nice Debbie..enjoyed your haiku.Best wishes....

Fabiyas M V

Date: 9/10/2011 10:56:00 AM

Beautifully penned on the light house,Debbie.Nice picture you have painted.Luv.Fabiyas

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/9/2011 11:10:00 PM

awesome, Debs. Closest to real haiku that I have probably seen for this contest.

Debbie Guzzi
Date: 9/10/2011 8:21:00 AM

thanks Andie I try BUt I'm afraid the second one at least has judgement in it...the injection of the poets judgement is not done in haiku

Rick Parise

Date: 9/9/2011 8:54:00 PM

Its dew on the web...wich makes the circle....watch your words sometimes deb / I'm not in the mood

Date: 9/10/2011 1:18:00 PM

Thank you Rich of course you are right I will try to be gentler in my comments

Rick Parise

Date: 9/9/2011 8:48:00 PM

Hi my friend!!!~great imagery Deb. I love your angle and unique approach. ENJOYED!!God bless~ ^Rick