---A Grey Kitten

a grey kitten inside a white porcelian tub--- claws shriek

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/16/2014 8:28:00 PM

back at this cute haiku to give you a copy of what I wrote under the comment you just gave me on my spring haiku(in case you don't see the comment I made there): thanks so much for saying this, Debs. You are someone who truly tries to get things right and what Freddie said in his blog is just wrong!! I loved your contest and you did nothing wrong in your directions to us. You want only to help others and grow alongside them.

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 8/2/2011 12:15:00 PM

ha! very witty ending! a great visual :)

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 8/2/2011 7:37:00 AM

Amusing and clever play on words. I can clearly picture this! Nice one! xoxo, Robert.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/2/2011 1:00:00 AM

oh, how cute the play on words here! your new kitty?

James Peranteau

Date: 8/1/2011 9:54:00 PM

Hi Debbie, cute little write here my friend, reminds me of the picture you posted on FB. Have a great night....much love, james

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/31/2011 6:31:00 PM

Reminds me of some of the pet and nature scenes that people have sent me..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for the humorous remarks on my work..Sara

Kash Poet

Date: 7/31/2011 5:25:00 PM

Cute Haiku indeed...enjoyed.

Dana Smith

Date: 7/31/2011 4:47:00 PM

How cute. Enjoyed. :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/31/2011 4:37:00 PM

Very creative, Deb, and witty as well. It's hard for cats to climb out of tubs because their claws have nothing to grab. Enjoyed your senryu! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/31/2011 12:38:00 PM

cool..and picturesque.. kitty in tub..sslide show..neato Debbie... do u have an extra pair of glass cause according to Yasmin Smokey brokes yours..oh...sorry... my cat Gabriel is a rammy cat too.. but so lovable...