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When Is It Wrong

When a home you tried to build for so many years. Has become a sorrowful place, a darkest cave for fears. No harmonies and joy fill each room everyday. Was there any good reason left to stay? When is it wrong to quit a game... If you started to taste the sweetness of pain. When abusive words can't be heard, Is it when I lie inside the bed of death? When is it wrong to give up, I keep confronting my heart out. Is it enough to just kneel down And ask forgiveness a thousand times? They say it's usual for a couple to argue, Break one's heart then start anew. Let the children suffer and abused... Isn't it fair to stop the breaking voice? If I step out... Will it be a sin to relive a life? Give this love another chance, When is it wrong to be right?

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Date: 2/24/2015 1:51:00 AM
Congrats on ur winning awesome write Aiyah!
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Date: 2/22/2015 5:51:00 PM
Aiyah, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win, Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 2/22/2015 4:18:00 PM
a heartfelt write - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/22/2015 4:11:00 PM
Aiyah, Sorry, it took me this long to close my contest. Congrats :) NATE
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Date: 3/4/2014 12:13:00 PM
Its wrong to give up when you still have somethin to give, somthin you need. J.A.B.
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Date: 3/4/2014 12:04:00 PM
The metaphysics of Love, genuine partnership, I really feel this write Aiyah. "When is it wrong to be right..." a question that demands a true answer. J.A.B.
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 3/5/2014 10:46:00 AM
J.A.B ... thank you for a sincere comment dear... !!! ^__^
Date: 3/4/2014 9:26:00 AM
the depth of this write begs for answers, aiyah.. what a bittersweet, unique pice.. huggs!
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 3/5/2014 10:45:00 AM
Nette.... the Poet Highness...thank you for a wonderful comment!! ...seeing your comment is one of my happiness ^__^
Date: 3/4/2014 9:24:00 AM
The heart speaks only truth . The mind can cast doubt . Follow your heart Aiyah
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 3/5/2014 10:39:00 AM
i followed my heart, Daz... and it lead me to my happiness...my nest...our nest...where i can find my happiness...Thanks for your advice.. ^__^
Date: 3/4/2014 7:52:00 AM
Painful but written with a passion! As Peter says, listen to your heart! Kudos dear friend! Loving hugs, Jack XOX
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 3/5/2014 10:42:00 AM
my dearest ,Jack (the naughtiest! ) ..thank you for this sincere comment... i appreciate it so much!! ..^___^
Date: 3/3/2014 1:52:00 PM
Oh wow, this is a heart-felt write indeed..God is a forgiving God. He knows your heart. Awesome write!!
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 3/4/2014 7:20:00 AM
Thank you,Pace for a wonderful comment... i appreciate your visit on my page.. oxoxo ^_6

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