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The Celery Fields

(One of my rare attempts at macaronic writing--the reasons for it may be found in the context of the poem. Only a smattering of knowledge of Spanish is needed) Madre de Dios! Morning already? The mud, still damp upon my pantalones-- how can I face another day? My niña is so thin. Two little oranges are not enough for her, before she rides the bus to the escuela. I must work harder, still-- hacer algunos dollars more hacer su vida para el mejor, si puedo. I remember when like my niña, I was young.. We did not work so hard, y sobre las alturas every breeze was cool... not like this steaming California campo by the sea. I remember, as we worked, how we were singing, 'De la sierra morena, Cieli...' Now there is no heart, no time to sing. El jefe blanco will be angry if I make him late. The sun is high upon this field. My back hurts me so much from bending. Ay! En muchas horas I can sleep again and stop remembering. Jesús amado, en mi sueño solamente, take me home ............... to my brown mountain. ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/7/2012 11:53:00 AM
Reminds me of Harry Belafonte and Cotton Fields Down Home. Tengo unas pocas palabras. This probably isn't correct. I was lousy at Spaniosh. Enjoyed this write - as with all your efforts - muchissimo! daver
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Robert Ludden
Date: 8/7/2012 12:07:00 PM
Thank you. I am glad you are reading them, and would appreciate more comments from you.
Date: 8/7/2012 11:16:00 AM
Ah, this is fluid and if I've missed out on a word or two, it is still wields an emotional punch! A very touching write, Dean. that expels heartache and loss. I will think of macaronic writing, for this moving write teaches it so very well!! Best wishes, Mikki
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Robert Ludden
Date: 8/7/2012 11:20:00 AM
I don't think that it teaches it so much as it exploits it. Do let me know of any words you missed out. I want this one to be very clear.

Book: Shattered Sighs