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Apprehension

The apparition of these faces in the crowd; Manifests uncertainty. Stark staring eyes gaze fearfully. Only heartbeats, and the ticking clock Break silence; then as a whistle blows Each mask unfurls in victory. G. B. Seal. Complete the lines. 7/ 25/ 2015 Line 2 - Ezra Pound.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/5/2015 8:31:00 PM

very interesting one you came up with based on that first line. It reminds me of mardi Gras!!

George Seal
Date: 8/14/2015 10:46:00 AM

Hello Andrea, i tried to think out of the box for this one, but Mardi Grads yes i think that would have fitted in perfectly too. Thankyou for reading the poem. Regards. George.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/5/2015 12:45:00 AM

just spellbinding, each line flowing through the next.. sweet congrats in my contest,goerge, and thanks for joining!

George Seal
Date: 8/14/2015 10:55:00 AM

Hello Nette, first i must thankyou for setting the contest i enjoyed participating. I also thankyou for your very kind comments on my poem. My kindest regards to you. George.

Laura Leiser

Date: 8/4/2015 12:30:00 PM

A great take on this line, George. Congrats on your win :)

George Seal
Date: 8/14/2015 10:59:00 AM

Hello Laura, you are so kind with your comment about my poem, i very much appreciate you doing so. Thankyou. Cheers George.

Tammy Reams

Date: 8/4/2015 8:29:00 AM

Congrats on your win George!

George Seal
Date: 8/14/2015 11:23:00 AM

Thankyou Tammy, i appreciate your kind thoughts. Cheers George.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/4/2015 12:46:00 AM

Congrats on ur winning awesome write george! Wonderful imagery!

George Seal
Date: 8/14/2015 11:28:00 AM

Hello Upma, i do appreciate your most kind remarks, thankyou so much. My regards to you reading my poetry. George.

Skat A

Date: 8/4/2015 12:41:00 AM

George, Congratulations on your win. **SKAT**

George Seal
Date: 8/14/2015 11:32:00 AM

Hi SKAT, it's so good of you to send me your congratulations, thankyou very much. Cheers George.

Eve Roper

Date: 8/3/2015 9:16:00 PM

George, congratulatations on your win a 7 wonderful write. Hugs Eve

George Seal
Date: 8/14/2015 11:36:00 AM

Eve please accept my most kindest regards to you for reading my poem. I do appreciate you wishing me well. Thankyou very much. Cheers George.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/3/2015 4:32:00 PM

many congrats on your win George:-) hugs Jan xx

George Seal
Date: 8/14/2015 11:40:00 AM

Thankyou Jan, i very much appreciate your congratulations. My kindest regards to you. George.

Jan Allison

Date: 7/26/2015 8:59:00 AM

I sense the anxiety ... just waiting for the final whistle to go then woohoooo - love the take on the theme:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx7

George Seal
Date: 8/14/2015 11:18:00 AM

Hello Jan, sports supporters provide plenty of facial expressions and emotions to fit any scene. Thanks for your kind remarks and well wishes. Cheers George.