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on a wedding day

Walking down the aisle While sweet music softly plays Feels like on the clouds With my pure white wedding gown And my hands with fresh bouquet We take solemn vow On sunny or stormy days Whatever happens Together without a fear We embrace our future aims In a new sunrise We lovingly look forward Sprinkled with blessings We’ll bind together with love Love- forever from above October 8,2012 3rd Place Winner Contest: Tanka-Love and Marriage Judged: 10/20/2012 Poet Sponsor: SandyIvy Davis

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Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 6/29/2013 7:18:00 PM

This is a great poem for the contest. Thanks for sharing..... Lucilla

Sandy Ivy D

Date: 11/30/2012 7:15:00 PM

Leonora, reading this one again. A very nice October Win. I am now adding you to my favorite poet list. cheers. SandyI

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/23/2012 5:39:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/23/2012 7:05:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning poem in SandyIvy's "Tanka-Love & Marriage" contest Leonora. Love, Carol

Skat A

Date: 10/20/2012 9:50:00 PM

Leonora, congrats luv*Siddy

Joseph May

Date: 10/20/2012 8:17:00 PM

well penned Leonora...congrats on your win

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/20/2012 7:58:00 PM

SUPER CONGRATS LEONORA ON A TREMENDOUS WIN FOR THIS AMAZING LUV AND MARRIAGE ENTRY..

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 10/20/2012 5:08:00 PM

Beautiful and lovely write,Leonora...Very smooth and enticing piece..Congratulations on your super win...

Sandy Ivy D

Date: 10/20/2012 3:53:00 PM

leonora, enjoy your win' Sandy

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/12/2012 9:46:00 AM

MESMERIZING LINES OF PRECIOUS SENTIMENTAL EMOTION LEONORA ..AWESOME FLOW OF WEDDING DAY BEAUTY .. MY BIRTHDAY IS MAY 21ST .. AND I JUST ENTERED YOUR CONTEST LUV .. MY HUBBY HAD A MOMENT TO TYPE FOR ME ..HAVE A SWEET WEEKEND LUV ..

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 10/11/2012 5:00:00 PM

Like a trip into eternity I think; and holds many surprises along the way. You give the experience such hope and special meaning. Love, Elizabeth

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/11/2012 6:04:00 AM

These tanka are more personal and about love as most tankas were in the past! good ones.. Light & Love

Justin Bordner

Date: 10/10/2012 11:27:00 PM

I admire the fearless approach in your wedding dream Leonora - fear of the future should not intrude on fresh love - I also like how you give respect to Providence - J.A.B. %

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/10/2012 3:42:00 PM

Just stopping here again to say HOWDY.

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 10/10/2012 10:04:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. This is a beautiful poem for a wedding day. many blessings. Lucy

Jack Horne

Date: 10/10/2012 9:40:00 AM

lovely write, Leonora. Congrats on your wins, my friend : )

Chidozie Uche O.

Date: 10/10/2012 1:16:00 AM

Nice write up about that beautiful day in human's life...... Wonderful piece, short and precise.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/9/2012 11:03:00 PM

this is very sweet, Leonora. For a busy girl, you are keeping up very well here!! Wish I had more time but I have to get off here right now. See ya later, alligator!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/9/2012 8:42:00 AM

Good morning my awesome friend, Leonora, Your wedding images, are a brides dream come true... i love the feeling of the sunrise.... I wishing you the best of luck in the contest.. enjoyed reading your tankas this morning... always~ :-) PD

Len Gasun
Date: 10/9/2012 8:54:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend PD and the rest for the inspiring comments.

Wilma Neels

Date: 10/9/2012 8:28:00 AM

Leonora, you captured the beauty of that special day, I especially loved the ending :) hope you have a great day :) *hugs* Wilma

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 10/9/2012 7:35:00 AM

very nice poem friend Leonora..when are you going to get married? please invite me okay? hahahahha..have a good day always!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/9/2012 7:31:00 AM

A real princess wedding, romantic and lovely - only eyes for each other - nothing else matters - Leonora hope I will be invited when the big day comes. :) - Beautifully poem, as always. - Have a nice Tuesday afternoon. - - Oxox love Anne-Lise :)