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There Are Such Men

His body sat there, in its chair, unmoved, but for the whims of those who care an hour or so, until the time clock sets them free, yet he has left them long ago, his stare misleading lesser travelers who stand in elevators and in trains and are quite unaware of their imprisonment in other chairs less mobile, but much more confining to the mind. It is a question, truly, who may claim to pity whom, and where the markers are along the way; of when the watchers are the watched, of how ideas play upon the screens before or just behind their eyes. And do we patronize a liberty we may not know? Are there true, wondrous lands to which the tiny particles within alone may go? The Steven Hawkings of the universe depart at will aboard these spirit ships, invisible in port, and then upon returning will report the finding of an India that we had never seen, or never ever dreamed. ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/12/2012 4:23:00 AM
thanks for explaining, sweetness, I got the gist of the poem, just the last bit threw me a little; yes I know who steven hawking is, I'm not that dense! :-) methinks lots of people make light of what they don't understand...re-reading the last bit a light bulb went on in my mind, I now know exactly what the poem means, it's implying that those who appear physically confined may have a richer internal life than people who are physically able, it's about transcending limitations, am I right?
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Robert Ludden
Date: 8/12/2012 8:37:00 AM
Of course you are.
Date: 8/11/2012 4:26:00 PM
Certainly. Do we make light of something that we do not understand? I'm sure you know who Hawking it. If not, look him up. Does he not reveal things we hadn't imagined? I think so. Amazing fellow, particularly since he has transcended all of his many physical limitations. We should be thankful every day that he has!
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Date: 8/11/2012 3:46:00 PM
can you explain the final stanza to me please? (yes I know I'm a bit dense) I understood it up until that last bit...you don't wanna explore the area behind my eyes, well not unless you're a shrink, they seem to enjoy 'probing' me lol
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Robert Ludden
Date: 8/11/2012 4:27:00 PM
Certainly. Do we make light of something that we do not understand? I'm sure you know who Hawking it. If not, look him up. Does he not reveal things we hadn't imagined? I think so. Amazing fellow, particularly since he has transcended all of his many physical limitations. We should be thankful every day that he has!
Date: 8/11/2012 3:39:00 PM
I do, and I do. :-)
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Date: 8/11/2012 1:52:00 PM
Yes, there are such men, I agree, and not just from conjecture. "of when the watchers are the watched, of how ideas play upon the screens before or just behind their eyes." That area just behind the eyes is one I've explored in the past, and the findings? If you dare to talk about those to most anyone, you will find yourself talking to yourself. Good stuff, Robert. Love, daver
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Robert Ludden
Date: 8/11/2012 3:40:00 PM
I do, and I do. :-)
Date: 8/11/2012 8:50:00 AM
Thank you!
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Date: 8/11/2012 8:43:00 AM
Wondeful piece my friend... well done.. Michael
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Robert Ludden
Date: 8/11/2012 8:50:00 AM
Thank you!

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