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The Rumbling Presence Underneath

It's always there. And it would speak with eloquence if I would simply stand aside-- out of the way of anything besides my clamorous self... that much beloved (and hated) fellow who cannot seem to recognize priorities. It seems to have some consciousness, and works its way into my dreams sometimes, when I am indolent. And then it briefly has a voice, stimulates my curiosity, and may inspire a poem or a thought to nag at me, particularly when another soul is at my side to listen. Ah, but then it tends to dwindle, fade and disappear. No, the buck stops here and it is mine alone. Mine to give the care it needs, and mine to carry into war, and peace, and consequence. Mine to rumble with, and mine even to celebrate-- then, and now, and to my own demise-- perhaps beyond for all I know. I hear it, feel it, love it helplessly. Now pardon me, for I must spend a little time to know it better still. ~

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Date: 7/11/2014 10:22:00 AM
The rumbles speak loudly to me, Dean. Lovely write....Even if you must leave the reader hanging while you do some listening of your own!
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Robert Ludden
Date: 7/11/2014 10:47:00 AM
When the reader is like you, she is worth hearing!
Date: 1/16/2014 3:22:00 PM
Thank you, and I really enjoyed visiting your site today. I'll be reading more, and hope you'll look at more of my own. I would value your thoughts, negative ones included. Sorry about the double entry above. I'll try to correct that. -Dean
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Date: 1/16/2014 2:29:00 PM
How noble is curiosity, how far does the mind travel, whether lost in thoughts that may or may not have meaning, how quiet when they're all gone.... a few thoughts that came to me while reading your poem, thanks for the inspiration
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