Help Me

Please God help me That when my pen opens wide To make strides and glides It will all be kisses and hugs It will make the other ..... Encouraged and Grow.

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Lewis Nyaga

Date: 2/21/2015 1:09:00 AM

Interesting pen.. very interesting talks of hugs and kisses in the same breath as pen.. and i name it interesting

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 2/21/2015 7:51:00 PM

Lol. Thank you Lewis

Kp Nunez

Date: 2/20/2015 7:56:00 PM

Must be what's in the heart of all poets, Njeri. Beautiful, heartfelt prayer. May I add, "That when my attempt, they've already read/ Their mind and heart will be blessed". You've inspired me! God smiled at me today through the sunshine that came my way. I share the same courtesy with you, this beautiful Saturday. Hugs and smiles. Kim :D

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 2/21/2015 7:50:00 PM

Oh wow such beautiful words Kim. Thank you and God bless you

Richard Nnoli

Date: 2/20/2015 1:30:00 PM

lol, beautiful poem here njeri richard

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 2/21/2015 7:45:00 PM

Thank you Richard!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 2/20/2015 12:32:00 PM

:) How sweet....this is a prayer answered, for I'm touched by your write.

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 2/21/2015 7:44:00 PM

That's really sweet of you Eileen. Thank you