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Dusk

Living for the moment dying in a dream the tomb touches down I can feel you scream Tottal darkness has set in from now eternally I feel a deepend sadness and it's growing inside of me I feel the sorrow and the pain now what could I do As the daylight turns to dusk memories of me and you . James.................................

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/29/2010 8:19:00 AM
A few words to let you know I have read your poetry today and enjoyed it James. I hope to read many more of your poems in 2011. Wishing you a New Year filled with good health , love, and amazing inspiration. May your writing endeavors become all that you have wished for. HAPPY NEW YEAR. Love, Carol
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