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A Husband Abuse

~A Husband Abuse~. My husband after 10 years his love turned into hatred When he buried my soul stole my strength for his own self drowned my head to suffocate me leaving me breathless. When he betrayed my love & broke my ego towards a helpless fate. I need to forget when he laughed with everyone but made me cry. When he looked old to make me feel older when he broke my mirror to make me look ugly when he breathed but suffocated me stepped on my shadow to erase my existence. His heart was like a ship loaded with anger When that night he slashed my body into pieces till the ocean turned red rescued by my 2 sons. Todays scars are all over my body. This I cannot forget. Therese Bacha 5/7/2013

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/30/2013 1:12:00 AM

terry, I could have sworn I had read this one of yours before. But I do not see my comment under here. maybe you had written on the same theme. in fact, I think that must be it. I read a longer version of this poem probably. I really love how you wrote this. This is a very well deserved win, Terry. I hope you will have a peaceful Saturday. Email me and keep me posted about your brother. Luv, Andrea

Therese Bacha
Date: 3/30/2013 3:25:00 AM

Hi Andrea, Thank you so much, yes this is the one the guy was looking for me, i don't remember his name. Have a lovely week end. Love Terry xoxoxo

Tim Ryerson

Date: 3/29/2013 8:38:00 PM

Shocking and compelling prose, Therese..Men like this are nothing more than bullying, insecure cowards, beating up on those who are physically weaker to boost their own very weak egos...A well deserved win - Tim

Therese Bacha
Date: 3/29/2013 8:52:00 PM

Hi Tim, Thank you so much for sharing your sincere thoughts. Now that i have all of you, my past has past already. Happy Easter. Love Terry xoxo

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/29/2013 8:31:00 PM

Hi Terry, Congratulations with your "Any Poem Goes" in my contest. It was an honor in hosting this contest once again. Take care and enjoy the up coming Easter Holiday. Goodnight*Always*LINDA

Therese Bacha
Date: 3/29/2013 8:50:00 PM

Hi PD I will thank from the bottom of my heart for accepting my poem and Honoring it. I also wish you and your family Happy Easter even with your sadness. My thoughts are with you. God Bless you. Love Terry xoxoxo

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 1/23/2013 3:36:00 AM

that the other would leave them alone.It surely shows honest painful emotions here..Yet.im glad that whilst writing your verses it showed that you realized that though he tried to make you feel ugly..worthless and more..deep down you realized you are not ugly and worthless.A very strong powerful write from a beauriful. soul..again to my favs.What doesnt kill you makes you stronger and strong you are.May every abuser find time in life to forgive himself maybe then he can find peace..hugs

Therese Bacha
Date: 2/16/2013 8:08:00 PM

I am so sorry i did not answer you back, i never got it, i just saw it.....i need to thank you for your wonderful heart felt support , i really do appreciate that very much......yes i was abused verbally daily..but i had my kids who always supported me.....Love Terry xoxo

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 1/23/2013 3:29:00 AM

People do change unfortunately..they hurt us..they deceive us..they physically or mentally abuse us.Usually these abusers are bullies who. think nothing of themselves..they lack selfasteem and they try to hide the fact by hurting the most vulnerable.They use their power wrongly.They abuse physically or mentally.They go against whats right to show they are spmebody..they cheat too yes..to try and believe they re worth a penny.They try to make others feel worthless cos they are scared the cont.

Therese Bacha
Date: 2/16/2013 8:10:00 PM

He was avery jeoulos husband, and very spoiled by his family...but its over, i never brought my past to my present, as long as i had my kids i wanted nothing more..thank you so much Charmain.....Love Terry xoxo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/21/2013 4:42:00 PM

therese, you must be the one Frank is talking about at his blog. Go see!!! He really liked your poem and wondered why you pulled it out of his contest. It was GOOD and I feel bad you had to go through all that!!

Debbie Duncan

Date: 1/21/2013 9:43:00 AM

Oh, Terry, I love the way you put your words together, my mama taught me when I was little, NEVER" let a man hit you/me, treat you like dirt. So I never backed down,, besides I had my two brothers;} Though I never ran to them. I always pictured a chalkboard &eraser & erased the board. here's to winning contest . love & GOD Bless Terry;}

Therese Bacha
Date: 1/21/2013 10:50:00 AM

Hi Debbie,,,always you are here for me,to write to me the most beautiful words of support,,,,,i loved what you wrote,,,,, thank you so much,,and may our friendship remain an everlasting one,,,,,Love Terry xoxo

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 1/19/2013 8:43:00 AM

Terry; This horrible, for someone to have to go through something like this.There are different kinds of abuse. My ex husband - not my daughter's dad. I was married to for 10 years, made me feel the same way. He beat me once, but would go out with other women and wouldn't even come home. Worst when he got his green card. I finally file for divorce. I'm glad that you are here and safe. God bless you. Lucilla

Therese Bacha
Date: 1/21/2013 10:51:00 AM

Lucilla my friend i love your new picture with the hat,,so so elegant,see you later,,Love Terry

Therese Bacha
Date: 1/19/2013 10:11:00 AM

The more you write to me about your past, the more i feel how much YOU have suffered, even more then me, so happy we are here for each other, thank you so much.love Terry xoxo

Mehnaz Veetil

Date: 1/7/2013 8:13:00 AM

Very profound indeed. Congrats. women power makes a great deal of difference. Love, Mehnaz.

Therese Bacha
Date: 1/7/2013 4:47:00 PM

Thank you.......so much.....Happy New Year....xoxo Terry

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/3/2013 3:02:00 PM

Fantastic content and the way so many woman feel in a male dominated society, your line layout and page layout are not helping you. Let me know if you want me to show you what I mean [no content need be changed its great] Light & Love a new fan

Therese Bacha
Date: 1/3/2013 3:57:00 PM

Hi Debbie Happy New Year...i arranged it because i take your opinion...but i do not know if this what you would suggest...please do help me in anyway you want....thank you so much xoxoxo Terry

Eileen Manassian

Date: 1/2/2013 7:59:00 AM

What an emotional journey through your pain! I will refer to this poem in my writing class to encourage my students to be in touch with the rawness of it all! Thanks for sharing this with us. I was touched by it all.

Therese Bacha
Date: 1/2/2013 9:56:00 AM

Hi Eileen......thank you for reading my poem.....yes the journey was emotional...life sometimes is not easy....i am touched by your very nice comment....xoxo Terry

Richard Palmer

Date: 12/31/2012 5:40:00 PM

wonderful write Therese,happy new year and may all your dreams become a reality

Therese Bacha
Date: 12/31/2012 6:00:00 PM

Thanks Richard A great successful New Year to you to.....much much happiness....xoxo Terry

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/30/2012 1:54:00 PM

WoooW....well done, Therese !!! - I like this, very well written. - HAPPY NEW YEAR!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Therese Bacha
Date: 12/31/2012 9:59:00 AM

Happy New Year Anne-Lise........Thank you so so much for your beautiful comments......xoxoxo Terry