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Heartless Inside

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Heartless Inside

                                              I gave you my little heart
                                        Wrapped up in bright dreams so fine
                                            You tore past the soft tissues
                                         And you bruised this heart of mine
                                      Your strong hands mulled and pawed it
                                            Wondering what made it beat
                                           You were gleeful to have found
                                                 Such a dainty little treat
                                                But you quickly tired of it
                                            And you tossed my heart aside
                                                I’m one of the living dead…
                                              You left me heartless inside.

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  1. Date: 6/27/2013 11:06:00 PM
    How did I miss this one? It has a bit of a spooky quality. I enjoyed my evening read. Hugs Rick, sweet dreams.

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 4:38:00 PM
    Eileen it flows well and stirs emotions, well done...David

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 12/3/2012 12:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, David. Kind of you! Have a great day!
  1. Date: 12/2/2012 7:57:00 AM
    Touching deep piece... I can feel the hurt.. nicely written... hugs Michael

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 12/2/2012 8:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Michael! Your post means a lot to me! Have a good day!