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Heartless Inside

I gave you my little heart Wrapped up in bright dreams so fine You tore past the soft tissues And you bruised this heart of mine Your strong hands mulled and pawed it Wondering what made it beat You were gleeful to have found Such a dainty little treat But you quickly tired of it And you tossed my heart aside I’m one of the living dead… You left me heartless inside.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/21/2015 9:01:00 PM
Hi Eileen I am at Sparkling hill for three days so don't worry about me. Hugs Rick
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/21/2015 10:51:00 PM
Rick, I'll miss you. I'm glad you told me because I would write and ask. Very thoughtful of you. As it is I was hoping to read something new from you...I checked. I guess I can go to a lovely one of your older writes. :) Have a great time....hugs
Date: 6/27/2013 11:06:00 PM
How did I miss this one? It has a bit of a spooky quality. I enjoyed my evening read. Hugs Rick, sweet dreams.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/21/2015 10:52:00 PM
How did I miss thanking you from the bottom of my heart? ;) All the best to you, Richard. Hugs
Date: 12/2/2012 4:38:00 PM
Eileen it flows well and stirs emotions, well done...David
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/3/2012 12:33:00 AM
Thanks, David. Kind of you! Have a great day!
Date: 12/2/2012 7:57:00 AM
Touching deep piece... I can feel the hurt.. nicely written... hugs Michael
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/2/2012 8:06:00 AM
Thanks, Michael! Your post means a lot to me! Have a good day!

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