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9-11: Never Forgotten

My friend Justin and I want to dedicate this poem to everyone in America and those from other countries who have died, and also to those that lost their loved ones on this most atrocious day 11 years ago. ------------------------------------------- In the busy streets of New York City, Many a passerby made their way to work It was a typical work day—or so they thought It was an unexpected day when a great tragedy would strike Two of the city’s greatest towers would fall in humility And along with them many wonderful families Even others from different countries would lose a loved one In just a matter of minutes, all of what was that typical work day Became a nightmare—a terrorist’s delight Everything in chaos and confusion Cries all through the day and night Many called their loved ones if they survived that long Many panicked, but some were dead calm Knowing there was no way out They poured their hearts out on that last telephone call, their legacy born The attackers thought they broke us! But they failed—we didn’t break at all Instead they brought us closer as a nation And the people who lost their lives are with us always Never forgotten in our minds and in our hearts

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/14/2012 5:28:00 PM
great write, and as you mentioned to bring all closer is great, just sad it sometimes takes things like this to do it, what a wonderful dedication you have written to remember the victims and also to all, to not take one day for granted,bless you in your work
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Date: 9/14/2012 4:14:00 AM
May the victims never be forgotten, and with wonderful but sad poetry like this, the memory of those will live on, thanks Laura and Justin:::::
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 9/14/2012 5:25:00 PM
Thanks a mill. (:
Date: 9/12/2012 1:01:00 PM
so well said and I love how you brought to light the positive, the courage of those who were faced with the knowledge they would not survive and had only love in their hearts.... beautiful. Smiles from Cyndi
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 9/12/2012 1:16:00 PM
I'm glad you liked my poem. It is a beautiful thing, and so very sad. Glad you got the positivity out of it. Justin has a way of making my poems a little brighter - it was mostly his doing. :) ~Laura
Date: 9/12/2012 9:32:00 AM
This is a beautiful write and dedication to the memory of the people whos lives were lost on 9-11.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 9/12/2012 1:14:00 PM
Thanks ~Laura
Date: 9/12/2012 6:20:00 AM
sad... it still haunts... well written!
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 9/12/2012 1:14:00 PM
It does, doesn't it? Thanks for reading. ~Laura
Date: 9/12/2012 3:48:00 AM
FANTASTIC remeberecne of that day great write luara it will never be forgotten.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 9/12/2012 1:11:00 PM
Thanks so much! ~Laura
Date: 9/12/2012 3:35:00 AM
A day where the whole world was shocked. It will never be forgotten. A fantastic well written memory poems Laura and Justin. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 9/12/2012 1:11:00 PM
Thank you, Anne. You are such a wonderful support to many people. I hope you have a wonderful day. ~Laura

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