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5-7-5 Senryu's In 10 Minutes

I swung at heaven And now I write poetry Such a loving God ---------------------------------------------------- litttle time to pay rent to the landlord's unknown wont see me again -------------------------------------------------- funky basslines race through a weird obsticale course called the mind of james -------------------------------------------- 2 minutes to go a masterpiece wasn't wrote so aint got no mojo -----------------------------------------

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/21/2009 1:38:00 PM
Enjoyed this one. I think you've got that mojo going. Thanks for giving me a chance to chuckle and for your kind words on my poem. Keep on writing. Have a wonderful day! Karen
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Date: 4/15/2009 1:54:00 PM
good job. jhl
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Date: 4/12/2009 3:12:00 AM
Nice sequence James, you have the form down, great flow. Happy Easter to you and your family...Raul
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