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45th- BLANK

there are 2 blank cards
in the angel card deck so
today I'm "depressed"

for this to be the 
best country in the whole world
today it looks sad

just happy that I 
was a member of the age
of Aquarius

our best hour was 
revolution of 60's
created big change

now elephants rule
just capitalistic pigs
love hear themselves squeal

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  1. Date: 11/3/2010 7:05:00 AM
    at least maybe the braying will be quiet for a while....LOL

  1. Date: 11/3/2010 6:39:00 AM
    Nice thoughts on the currect state of affairs, kristi

  1. Date: 11/3/2010 6:25:00 AM
    enjoyed the sentiment, but a sad enjoyment, this would be more powerful and appropriate in free verse, forget forcing it into 5/7/5 (totally agree with you ;) Light & Love