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2 Broken Halfs Dont Always Make a Heart

I am one of the most loyal chicks in the game who could of showed you all woman aren't the same you refrained from giving me a chance my beauty within and not use to enchant My reserves caused you to become unnerved You never wanted to wait so I gave in to heartbreak I wanted a mate and deep within your eyes I thought you did too .. ..........Oh my god ! what you men put the good women through !! I gave in to your temptations only to become another past scab that treated you soo bad You already were infected from a no good dame who claimed fame by savagely slaying whatever soul you had in there caged now im actually understanding of her jabs due to our recent exchange if only I filled your needs that are ours we both could of healed but now your too hardened to notice a real ladies appeal

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Date: 4/29/2013 3:59:00 PM
Will not accept blanket judgment of men. There are good and bad in all men and women. It seems that too often they are mismatched from the start... Great poem....You will like some of the stuff I write and hate some.... I'll visit often.... Jake
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Date: 4/29/2013 11:54:00 AM
Yes I agree most mens hearts are hardened by hardships, but not all men. AS I notice a real ladies appeal. Enchanting poem!
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Book: Shattered Sighs