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2012: Invasion of Fear (Co-Written With James Fraser)

She tosses and turns, wrinkles the sheets It's December 21st, but there's so much heat She notices a light streaming bright from the sky Runs to the window, a sight meets her eyes I have written, as the future will have read That the year 2012 will leave your world dead An invasion will happen, look to your skies For you will be visited, to them you're despised An ominous orb hovers o'er her home She opens the door, through the woods she roams One by one, she watches the trees ignite Surrounded by flames she cowers in fright The day has been set, earth's fate has been chosen Humanity, evolution will be eternally frozen Lights will appear through thickening clouds When millions of eyes to the heavens will crowd She realizes now prophecies were true Though not as expected, death rays come through She looks up again and beyond the ship Heavens are opening, skies are parting quick The alignment of planets will dawn a new age The might of another will bring humanity rage Earth as you know it will become with bereave A dying planet she becomes as her oxygen leaves As the aircraft departs, she gasps her last breath Eternal life she earns, just physical death Stairway to heaven appears before her The Lord beckons; in soul she did not err

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/24/2010 9:32:00 PM
a wonderful collaboration,,truly richly detailed and with great rhyme throughout,,this indeed is full of details of a future event,,,penned so very well,,,as always my friend your words blend well with others or alone,,I am always pleased when I read lines posted from you,,,,Blessings..Cecil
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Date: 3/21/2010 4:02:00 PM
Carolyn, ever the lady.. Thank you so much. God bless you. I mean that. Regards, Gerard.
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Date: 3/21/2010 2:53:00 PM
This reads like a grand old parchment found in the ruins. Very Descriptive. You and James are an intriguing team. Thank you for your kind remarks! I appreciate it greatly. I'm glad you like my writing. It does me proud and at this time inmy life, I truly need nit! Regards, Gerard.
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Date: 3/19/2010 10:28:00 AM
Wow. A splendid write about the end of the world. Great job to the both of you! I enjoyed reading it this morning.
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Date: 3/17/2010 4:34:00 PM
A powerful write by two wonderful writers.. had me spellbound... Constance
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Date: 3/17/2010 12:20:00 PM
This is frightening. Thank heavens I don't believe in a sadistic Deity. daver
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Date: 3/17/2010 11:39:00 AM
Interesting thoughts and perspectives on the end of this age and the beginning of another..Keep the creative pen flowing.. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work... Glad to know that you are on FaceBook and PoetryPub...Sara
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Date: 3/17/2010 10:38:00 AM
Hey Carolyn, Thnx for leaving kind comments on my piece...really appreaciate it....Jimmy
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Date: 3/17/2010 7:11:00 AM
really strong and solid co write my friend but your reads are always greatand its a true honor to call you a friend wrote a new one please tell me what ya think cheers
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Date: 3/16/2010 5:27:00 PM
Fantastic Carolyn and James...scary though ! My 26 year old is bent on this theory ! He freeks me out some times. Great work here ! james
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Date: 3/16/2010 3:34:00 PM
This my very first co written piece Carolyn of yours I have read. You and the work of James Fraser knocked me off my feet on my head. Great Write Indeed, but now I must leave and it's both of you causing me to be a bat out of hell. Got to get to my shelter before helter skelter. Before 2012. Great Write Guys. Best Wishes Always, Bill
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Date: 3/15/2010 11:17:00 PM
Ow my,Im feeling as if im reading the apocalypse Car and James,terrifying..and you two rock our soup together,,great pair..:) Charma
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Date: 3/15/2010 2:47:00 PM
OMG a terrific read but scary.The year 2012 has me worried.Thanks for your sweet and kind comment Carolyn.Teresa
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Date: 3/15/2010 8:39:00 AM
Good co-work, Caroly! But we can only hope that this scenario will never come true. We've got too many disasters already and on of my good friends was just lucky that Cyclone Ului did not reacht the Island of Efate in Vanuatu. Not to forget the earthquakes!...Thank you for your comments...Love, Gert
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Date: 3/15/2010 6:59:00 AM
EXCELLENT collaboration my friend.... You and The Highlander certainly make a good pair.... Oh yeah I almost forgot, I have just tagged you for a game making its rounds... I Am A Poet..... I hope you have not been tagged yet!!!!... Good work my friend.....:JP]
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Date: 3/15/2010 5:19:00 AM
I like the happy ending...Thank God! Good one you , two. It's nice to see your talents joined again. Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/15/2010 12:30:00 AM
Thank you for your welcome blog comments today Carolyn.Rgds Brian
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Date: 3/14/2010 10:45:00 PM
OOps sorry, I saw the other girls' name beneath mine and confused the spelling for YOURS. By the way, you GOTTA see A Single Man and find out what happens to George. That was one of my very top movies of the year and it did not even get an Oscar nomination for best picture. GEEEEZ.
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Date: 3/14/2010 10:44:00 PM
YOu guys did quite well together, Caroline. An interesting write, and I hope all the hype about 2012 is not going to come to pass. I am too young to die. hahaha. Oh, well, If it comes I hope it's quick! LUv ya, Andrea
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Date: 3/14/2010 6:13:00 PM
Interesting write, balancing verses between, catastrophic happenings and the realization of the importance of Faith, for in faith there is no fear. Your poem is very well written, great cooperation of the pen, Carolyn and James. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind comments on my poem as well. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 3/14/2010 5:27:00 PM
and all the planets victoms realize it's too late; the bell has been rung. john
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Date: 3/14/2010 4:40:00 PM
enjoyed you two!! well done!!
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Date: 3/14/2010 2:18:00 PM
the possibility of the earth being destroyed doesn't scare me, because a new beggining would happen after some time. though at the same time, there are still some things to be done in peoples lives, i honestly don't believe it will end in that year.my opinion.but it might.it doesn't mean we can't still live after that(: but the violent impact maybe scares me a bit, not too much though. thoughtful write. yes men with hair are quite appealing eh?lol -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 3/14/2010 12:48:00 PM
You and James really are the dynamic duo of poetry. congrats on this intriguing write. Blessings to you both. Ron
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Date: 3/14/2010 10:34:00 AM
A perfect union of poetic talent and a superb story in poetry.. an ominous prediction but one I fear will be heading our way sooner than later.. kudos to both u and James for a rousing look into the future .. this is surely a classic... congrats on the theme and collaboration..luv.. Linda-Marie
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