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1-11-10 Dried Our Tears

The second your name, touches my lips, sweet spring warmth blooms upon them, The sun, becoming my smile, radiating from my body, my soul. Oh, the garden of roses that bloom beneath the moon, watered by my simple tears, and bloomed in your love, our growing love. The silver wash that falls down upon us, wiping away the stains that once pained us, Now we are bathed, yet it does not burn, yet it does not freeze, perfection. Oh for the eternities that i could lay with you, your arms the only protection i need, Your lips, the sweet ocean salt, the taste of your skin, all that i hunger. Your eyes, the only place i shall ever become lost within, oh within your heart forever. Your hands upon my skin, mine upon yours, sweat blending into the sexiest fragrence, there is no space between our bodies, should there ever be? our tounges tying, dancing, deepening each and every kiss, long and slowly, we make love, fast and rough we experiment, enjoying sexuality. darling, oh i long to feel your skin, to feel you deep within. can you hear my whispers? can you hear my pants? can you hear your name? or can you only hear mine? are you yelling it out like i am, yours? soon our lips will meet, and create a thousand volts of electricity, we could short the town, we could shut the world down, screaming out our passion, screaming out your name. Oh and the rain has washed away our pain and fears, and the beautiful sun has dried up all our tears.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/12/2010 4:45:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Rain. Thank you so much for sharing it with us here at PoetrySoup. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/11/2010 6:55:00 PM
A very impressive write, you get your feelings down on paper well in this one, keep up the good work,,..thanks on Old 'soldier, I wrote that about my Dad, he was wounded in Europe during WWII, had nightmare until the day he died at 65..Danny
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Date: 1/11/2010 1:07:00 PM
As others have said, this is very passionate. I liked the way the poem progresses from tears, to them being dried up by the love of you and your partner. Thank you for the comment on my poem.
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Date: 1/11/2010 12:28:00 PM
Sweet poetry! I like the image ....a thousand volts of electricty a lot. Thanks for your kind words on my work! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 1/11/2010 11:43:00 AM
This is passionate Rain.a beautiful example of writing poetry. Writing poetry is like making love to your spouse. You need to put some rhythm in your rhymes. Whatever, the form might be. People are just going through a form anymore. That's not Love. Smile. Sincerely, Love, Moses
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Date: 1/11/2010 11:16:00 AM
Very profound. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Have a great day! Scarlett
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Date: 1/11/2010 11:16:00 AM
Very passionate write that you have penned here for your love one. Keep the expressive, romantic, descriptive, and passionate pen filled with ink so that you will always be ready to write. Thanks for the comments on my work. Sara
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Date: 1/11/2010 11:13:00 AM
very good beautiful i wish i could put those types of thoughts into words.
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