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A Pyramus and Thisbe Tale

A Pyramus and Thisbe Tale There once was a mulberry tree with berries white, Where two star-crossed lovers would meet covered by night. Each day through a hole in the wall, they'd share their plight. In spite of fam'lies' objections, they felt it right And held a love between them, stronger than their might. One night, they chose to meet, beneath the full moon, bright... Sweet maid, by the tree, heard a lion roar! In fright She ran...losing her veil...the lion tore in flight. Arriving late, he spied her veil and cried,"No! Spite!" His love was lost...so with his sword, his chest, did smite. The maid returned...fell on his sword cried, "Death unite!" Blood splashed the tree. Those berries now are red...when ripe. 1.16.2017©deborah burch Form: mono-rhyme (12-lines/12-syllables) Theme: based on Greek Tragedy of Pyramus and Thisbe (Edited 1/29/17)

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Date: 1/31/2017 2:06:00 PM
Great "Romeo and Juliet" poetry. Congratulations! :-)
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Date: 1/28/2017 8:04:00 PM
wow, that was great how you did this on a myth. It was quite dramatic, Deborah. I really like it.
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Deborah Burch
Date: 1/29/2017 9:34:00 PM
Andy you always make me smile!! Thank you dear. And big big congratulations to you!!! Hugggs and love!!!
Date: 1/28/2017 4:45:00 PM
Enjoyed the read. Congrats on your placement.
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Deborah Burch
Date: 1/29/2017 9:33:00 PM
Thanks Janis!! Congratulations to you also!!!:) big Hugggs.
Date: 1/27/2017 7:41:00 PM
Congrats on your win Deb
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Deborah Burch
Date: 1/27/2017 8:10:00 PM
Thank you Joseph!!! :)
Date: 1/18/2017 8:39:00 AM
I love Greek Mythology...and your Babylonian tragedy Monorhyme...top marks to ya Deb...and you used "good vocabulary" lol...god bless...^WW^
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Deborah Burch
Date: 1/19/2017 9:12:00 AM
Lol!!!:) thank you WW!! It seems you're the only one who realizes it was of Babylonian origin...sheds new light on Shakespeare doesn't it... lol...big hugs and blessings!!!;)
Date: 1/17/2017 5:44:00 PM
This was amazing Deb, really held me to the screen as I read. Nicely done my friend.
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Deborah Burch
Date: 1/18/2017 12:01:00 AM
Lol!! Sweet Chris!! You're so kind to me!;) thank you!! Biggest Hugggs!!
Date: 1/17/2017 8:36:00 AM
Shakespeare (Romeo and Juliet)These violent delights have violent ends And in their triump die, like fire and powder Which, as they kiss, consume. Good luck, Deb:)
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Deborah Burch
Date: 1/17/2017 9:44:00 AM
You're so cool!! Daniel!! Thanks!!;) Big Hugggs my friend!!
Date: 1/16/2017 11:43:00 PM
Oh, yeah, such sad myths of love..you weaved the story beautifully in your monorhyme, Cap'n:)
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Deborah Burch
Date: 1/17/2017 9:42:00 AM
:) Thank you Jo!! Big Hugggs!!

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