.in This Life I Bleed.

.In this life I bleed tears. .In this life I bleed. .In this I bleed hatred. .In this life I bleed. .In this life I bleed lust. .In this life bleed. .In this life i bleed fear. .In this life bleed. .In this life I bleed love. .In this life bleed. .In this life I bleed courage. .In this life bleed. .In this life I bleed envy. .In this life bleed. .In this life I bleed blood. >In this life I die<

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/19/2008 10:26:00 AM

Welcome to PoetrySoup. Please continue with your writing and share it with the world. Write from your heart and you will go far. Love, Carol

Michael Torres

Date: 11/11/2008 4:52:00 PM

Ayana we have to get yu to the hospital for bleeding so much lol. This is gripping and touching. Olease comment on my poems would love to hear your insight. Micahel Torres

Daver Austin

Date: 11/10/2008 6:43:00 AM

Just one poem, Avana? Good to hear from you with your passionate voice. Thanks so much for reading my little haiku. Seems your poem sums up what life is all about. There's gt to be more...this is implicite in your poem. Write more, more, more! Love, daver