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..Till Death Do Us Part...Death Remains...

Her fourth left finger holds a polished gold band, Rough is the inside. Charma (Inspired by Raul's contest photo'Sentiments of the Heart') not for the contest

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Sammy Shaq

Date: 3/7/2010 9:06:00 AM

Love the symbolism here. Marriage indeed, great write. Love, Sami.

James Fraser

Date: 3/7/2010 8:30:00 AM

Good luck in Raul's contest with this lovely Senyru Charmaine >> James

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/6/2010 5:59:00 AM

You need to enter the contests. Charma, your writing is wonderful. Enter them for Sharing, for practice, not for winning. You will receive more comments on your poetry that way because it will come up twice. Once when you write it and again when it places. Your writing takes the mind to wonderful new places. Share it more! I love you Charma. Thank you for sharing. (Soup Mail, Soon) Lovingly, Dane Ann

Noel Villarosa

Date: 3/6/2010 2:16:00 AM

This is a beautiful senryu, charmaine. Well polished words to get your message here. Appreciate your comments to my poem: Romancing distant moments. (^_^) Noel.

David Byrne

Date: 3/5/2010 10:40:00 PM

very clever!

Dr Robert Gonzo

Date: 3/5/2010 6:20:00 PM

great and beautiful write as you truley are a true talent and great friend always your insane friend Gonzo

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/5/2010 5:42:00 PM

Unsual...unsure the meaning that you wish to convey. Keep the creative pen flowing.. Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/5/2010 4:48:00 PM

One day soon perhaps we will both be wearing this lovely band u wrote of dear friend Charma... remembering the words to those precious vows in your title.. wonderful write ..luv.. Linda-Marie..