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..."?The Eye of the Storm!"

Intrepid winds once.... Whispering serenities promises; uncharted Into the chambers of their souls!? Watching these invisible wings now Carrying their dreams so, very far away ~ While reaching out to touch the hand of Echoing breezes illusive embrace?! To grasp the intangible things Through bars of molten steel; seven viles ~ Embeddingly fused into glass sharded concrete.... Brushing past their amissful fingertips; bending Muddled visions of what could have been But, what shall never now be, again!? Piercing their eyes these hurricanes of time Tornadoes spawning the devestation of a life Cast into the medieval dungeon of darkness; hades As the waves crash violently upon the shore Waiting for The Flying Dutchman to soon arrive?! Driven by the gales of tomorrows foreboding Shackling chains bound by, fates, skeletal crew.... This rogue which shall carry them away, forever ~ Deafly ears that could not hear, serenities promise Once whispered unto they amid the intrepid winds Transient storms now, carrying their spirits afar Beyond the rainbows that melted in the sky Beneath these scorching gusts which, blinded their sight While they wasted their chance within such opticals Reaching through verticals of, thorn laced bars Grasping at nothing but, intangible tides Vortical ideos that could have never saved, their lives Crossing the shadows of eternities solemn doors, now In through.... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ..."?The Eye of The Storm!"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/15/2011 5:36:00 PM
Oh well, I think I'll stick with this one...there's a riot happening at your last posting, John. Happy belated St Valentine's day...thanks too, for you greeting wish. Not sure what's going on, but keep safe. love to you, Mikki
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Date: 2/1/2011 11:31:00 AM
like reading a dark dream
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Date: 1/28/2011 8:01:00 AM
hi John, thanks for all your kind comments, wow a amazing poem, yea i went through an eye of astorm ans so amazing how god always carries us to the other side, one of my fave songs at the momet is called YOU NEVER LET GO by matt redman i think you will enjoy it . take care my precious friend Love diane
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Date: 1/20/2011 5:31:00 PM
This is another remarkable write from your beautiful soul....I do believe we are in the eye of the storm.....where "all" seems calm but not really....the vortex whirls and eternity is born...Blessings always, John. Love, Annalise
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Date: 1/19/2011 5:05:00 AM
A pleasant read, some nice images but not really my cup of tea.
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