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...Oil All the Hinges

oil all the hinges silence the light with rose pink… hide the computer *advise to lovers :P

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/23/2010 5:54:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Deborah in Linda-Marie's contest "Awesome Advice"(For The Bride & Groom). Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/22/2010 9:19:00 PM

Just saw your placement.In my book it's a number one!

Audrey Haick

Date: 8/22/2010 7:28:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Deborah! Peace, love, Audrey

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/22/2010 3:40:00 PM

Congrats with whatever your "number" was. I would sure place this one high!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/22/2010 3:39:00 PM

hahaha, VERY good advice for Miss gadgets. hahaha. Luv, Andrea

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 8/21/2010 9:11:00 PM

Deborah, I can appreciate "Oiling the hinges" when lovers are involved... Great write and congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C.

Francine Roberts

Date: 8/21/2010 6:17:00 PM

good advise, congrats on your win

Joyce Johnson

Date: 8/21/2010 4:23:00 PM

Wiose words. I like your attitude. congratulations. Love, Joyce

Ralph Taylor

Date: 8/21/2010 3:47:00 PM

Congrats, Deb.Nice going. Ralph

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/21/2010 7:50:00 AM

Congrats on your success in my contest Debbie..however the system will not allow me to finalize or post my winners list due to technical problems on site.. so enjoy with luv..ciao..

Francine Roberts

Date: 8/20/2010 11:25:00 PM

cute one, good advise