...Clinging Tears

clinging tears freeze to barren branches... empty lawnchairs rust

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David Smalling

Date: 11/11/2010 10:40:00 AM

With poems like this you convert me to believe brevity is best, because you handle it with so much genius and finesse

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 11/7/2010 9:14:00 AM

oh what a sad write this time but I really like that, "clinging tears" & of how you related it to those rusty lawn chairs-- nikko :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/5/2010 4:56:00 PM

Old man winter hurts..Good job in describing him..Sara

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 11/5/2010 2:42:00 PM

Love your words and expressions in this sad write...love Michael

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/5/2010 8:54:00 AM

ahh....makes me weep a bit for losing the warm sun...

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/5/2010 8:00:00 AM

I see this picture in my backyard for the last eight days. but today, snow is predicted in the afternoon, Debbie. very greate images,

Honesty Oimbo

Date: 11/5/2010 7:54:00 AM

it is a sharp obsevation

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/5/2010 7:28:00 AM

yes TEACH we are having lots of rain as tears here in N.J. for three days now... flooding stage has arrived but your clinging tears are lovely to read this happy weekend...enjoyed..

Eamon Duffin

Date: 11/5/2010 7:19:00 AM

Hi Deborah. Beautiful words . Thank you for your advice, I will work on it tonight. Thanks again, Eamon