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The day's of the id.... Waking, unto another prophecy, fulfilled While wearing these doxies blinds That have been placed Upon many of their eye's.... As if walking within one's sleep Within a perpetual, yet waning dream Unto these apparitions; ghastly That have become, their soon to be Realities.... These aquanaut's, of destiny's waters Submerged beneath the churning currents Of the everlasting's, blackest sea! These, blinkers of forebodings Aqua fortis dream's.... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ {The Elements}

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Date: 10/19/2010 3:08:00 PM
Our id wants out to do its thing and the ego and superego won't let it and it is drowning in the churning currents...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 10/25/2008 11:33:00 AM
Oh YES..........
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