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.... As It Is In Heaven ....

As it is ... Is it? Is there really a place of everlasting grace outside of my heart? What is this heaven where ether exhales stars through space winds and our planet moves ever forward through the dark? Conscious contact with the aliens in my mind and a poignant grasping for Never Neverland or, perhaps, the angels of our nature will greet my cynical eye ! Oh my ... never, never do I want to die unless, now truly truly ... Can't I know how it is as it is in heaven?

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Date: 1/12/2010 7:06:00 PM
Interesting exploration of cosmic truth, Sue. I wonder...if we are all one, can there even be that "other" that is heaven, distinct from "on earth"? Is heaven just a term to help us conceptualize oneness from a state of duality? Interesting. And I must say that I really appreciate your writing style.
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Date: 12/31/2009 3:49:00 AM
Excellent poem, leaves one questioning instead of being sermoned to!
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Date: 12/28/2009 3:58:00 PM
love the ending of this piece. great write...love and peace: james
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Date: 12/27/2009 8:15:00 PM
Heaven is in the beauty of a heart that gives and forget what it has given and dear Sue, you have that heart. With our love, and it is not always so easy, especially when days are tough, we make this world a little brighter every day. Great poem! Thanks for sharing and thank you for your nice comments on my poem. A very happy New Year 2010 to you and yours, Caroline.
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Date: 12/27/2009 5:24:00 PM
Hi Sue, no one knows for sure either way. I'm open to any and all possibilites, smile. I love your honesty and appreciate your sentiments. Keep writing and I'll keep reading!! Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/27/2009 4:32:00 PM
Nice, i like it. Do you think i make up my own interpretation of it, or just feel your emotions expressed.
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Date: 12/27/2009 4:32:00 PM
Beautiful and eloquent question with no simple answers, Sue...great poem! - Tim
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