........No Title....(Per Contest Requirements)

Freedom roaring Cheers burst in skies of midnight blue fireworks delight!

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Jack Horne

Date: 6/21/2013 1:34:00 PM

love this one too, my friend x

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/7/2010 11:38:00 AM

This was just great, Audrey, And tell me which one is your palindrome's title?

Rick Parise

Date: 7/1/2010 1:58:00 PM

very nice write!a winner for sure~beautiful Audrey~Rick

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/1/2010 1:47:00 PM

Hurray for "freedom roaring" through the cheers of the crowd. Outstanding haiku, Audrey! Love, Carolyn

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/1/2010 11:08:00 AM

Hi Audrey--what a festive haiku! :) is this for the contest? if it is, I think one of Deborah's rules is it should be untitled, the first line will be the title--hope this helps :) --nikko :)

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 7/1/2010 10:48:00 AM

This is just wonderful. It's getting me ready for the big day. The imagery is awesome. Great job! Joseph

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/1/2010 3:56:00 AM

Nice presentation on the fireworks. Good luck in the contest