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.............(Rain Haiku)

Drops on the river Silver ripples spread- Rust colors the bank Remembering getting caught in a fall shower while fishing on the Klamath River.

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Date: 5/19/2010 5:50:00 AM
It meant so much to me to read your poetry today Barbara. Wishing you the best in the contest. I hope each day takes you to greater heights in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/19/2010 12:57:00 AM
Great visual in L3 Bg.Rgds Brian & Thank you for your kind words
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Date: 5/18/2010 5:02:00 PM
Great entry Barb and good luck in Rick's first contest with this terrific write and footnote... enjoyed...luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 5/18/2010 5:00:00 PM
Nice! Great description and feel.
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Date: 5/18/2010 4:16:00 PM
Very descriptive Haiku... I like watching the ripples grow from something hitting the water like a raindrop...Keep the creative pen flowing...Sara
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Date: 5/18/2010 4:10:00 PM
If it was a warm day, I'll bet those raindrops were welcome, Barbara. Great imagery! Love, Carolyn
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