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I must have had a head like a sieve Or was I just simply misunderstood It's mad she'd take and me I'd just give Being made to feel like I always Should Bad, but no one sees how you really live Especially when everything turns to Crud Now a sorry looking lad or a bit of a dive But I tried the best that I possibly Could Stupid I was just a tad, being too sensitive Though not letting the tears cause a Flood And am I glad, that her I am no longer with? When she would always treat me like Mud Now in a single pad it's even more depressive Never thought it would end up being a Dud As I still feel so sad, and more apprehensive Yeah believe me right now it is not so Good Some bits like words no good inspierd by my poem a bad case of nostralgia kind of looking back how I feel now and then had idea for this for quit a while just working on other writtes some bits also taken from age of life this I tryed to do in same pattern as WORDS WONDERER IN MY ROOM KALIDOSCOPE EVOULVER ETC NOT LIKE SUBLIME AND ONE OF A KIND WITH THIS i WAS TRYING TO ADD TO OF TH RHYMING WORDS IN LINES 1 AND 3 WITH OUT DDING SO MUCH CONTENT SOMTHING DIFFRENT AS i KNOW ALOT OF MY WRITES TENT TO BE VERY RHYME INSPIERD BY ALL THOSE COOL POETS WHO ALWAYS COMENT ON MINE WRITTEN BY MYSELF DAVIDSCOTT JUNE JULY 2012 -FEB MARCH 2013
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