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No man could clarify my pain into one single solitary word when your hero falls whats there to feel but hurt such a strong indivual unable to be knocked off their feet never knowing the definition of lose, now openly admitting defeat what happened to that strong determined person i had grown to admire to hear you have fallen from the post of hero from which you have chosen to retire as you fell from the pedastal i placed you on i realised my character of admiration wasn't as strong as the illusion of a person i built my life on you were the template i drew my life from not what do i do i'm half way through that drawing so do i finish it and fail like you before your spirit weakened and your pride collapsed you were all i wanted to be but now i see you for what you truly are, thats not what i want for me how can somebody so true, be so free to abondon their honesty you used to be so kind, noble, helpfull, showing nothing but modesty you were there to show a better side to the world outdoors never taking anything from others but now your taking a great deal more you were a best friend a honest soul a shoulder to cry on a solid post an open ear, a person to rely on now your just an empty room, the bed on which i die on you used to be an open mind i felt free to talk to now you have chosen in my words the wrong woods to walk through how do i tell you exactly how i feel you know the worlds a dangerous place why let them steal the one thing that seperates you from us, your precious loving soul why dont you attack a situation with nothing but your all you always put your heart before everything including wealth you haven't just let down the world you've let down your self
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