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Still at times I can be an adolescent, a bit of a brat I'm always questioning things, though I'm suspicious I admit there's time's I've been ignorant to even chat Yeah quit a lot of the time I've been quite obnoxious A mr know it all! but at the time it seemed ludicrous Like the magician, trying to pull a trick out of the hat And getting everyone to say the words hocus pocus But me thinking wise to it all one can smell a dirty rat Then things I suppose at times are so blatantly obvious Some could say your either death or just blind as a bat But back then I was a little immature, as to it all oblivious Still inquisitive though I'm now older, a lot less of a prat And still I'm no real master mind, I'm not any genius Why this is this, I ask and that always has to be that?? Why something’s are not always, leaves one curious Though I was told it was curiosity that killed the cat ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, NOTE TO READERS AGAIN LIKE INTERWISON AND FATE JUST tweaked a few lines which I felt made better sense was originally going to add two extra verses but decided to take some words lines from extra two and rewrite first two verses in better context I don’t know again some inspiration fro all the cool soup poets thank you..............XXX ADDIN A LITTLE ON END NOT SURE IF NEEDED TO OUR OF INSPERATION RIGHT NOW SOUNDS STUPID I KNOW MAKES NO SENSE JSUT GOING THROUGH MY HEAD DEEP IN THOUGHT WHILE REWORKING OTHERS ID WROTE THIS POPED UP IN THE SAME VANE AS FATE SAME SOR OF PATTERN AND IDEA WITH THIS iM OBVISLY MORE KNOWLGABLE NOW THAN WHEN YOUNGER BUTSTILL I QUESTION A LOT OF THINGS WITH THIS TRYING TO ADD A LITTLE HUMOUR ALSO INSPIERD BY all the so cool poet members of the soup if I had never come on this site i would never have updated a lot of my old stuff or even wrote any of the thirty new writes ive wrote over the past year of being on here THANKYOU FOR YOUR INSPERATION AND COMMNETS MAKES ME FEEL APART OF SOMETHING XXXXXXXXXXXXXX THOUGHTS FEELINGS WORDS WITH MEANINGS
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