Login
|
Join PoetrySoup
Home
Submit Poems
Login
Sign Up
Member Home
My Poems
My Quotes
My Profile & Settings
My Inboxes
My Outboxes
Soup Mail
Contest Results/Status
Contests
Poems
Poets
Famous Poems
Famous Poets
Dictionary
Types of Poems
Quotes
Short Stories
Articles
Forum
Blogs
Poem of the Day
New Poems
Resources
Syllable Counter
Anthology
Grammar Check
Greeting Card Maker
Classifieds
Member Area
Member Home
My Profile and Settings
My Poems
My Quotes
My Short Stories
My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder
Soup Social
Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us
Member Poems
Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Random
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread
Member Poets
Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest
Famous Poems
Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100
Famous Poets
Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War
Poetry Resources
Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter
Email Poem
Your IP Address: 18.217.6.114
Your Email Address:
Required
Email Address Not Valid.
To Email Address:
Email Address Not Valid.
Required
Subject
Required
Personal Note:
Poem Title:
Poem
He strives for improvement, never reaches his goals A young male struggling strong foes His whole life considered inadequate Life is dull, and his heart he should quit Taken and destroyed for being himself Despondently trying to control what his heart felt Rejection is faced at each and every turn His heart's torn open, his eyes burn Never giving up he studies his life Watching others, adjusting his life With a new goal, he works incredibly hard Improving his body, improving his heart With these improvements he tries for love For he's focused, watches everything he does With a dollar and a romantic quote For valentine he sent a small note Feeling good, proud of his improvements He's worked hard, how can he miss His chest is bigger, abs are more cut Even more smiles, and more acting tough Well rounded he thought, talented in music Poetic and smart, that's how he viewed it Sure just once, he'd have that valentine The pride and the joy, to call his heart mine "Thank you for the note, but i don't feel for you that way." "I know..." he says, and she walks away He fought a war, and he has lost Tactics were changed, but he still shouldn't of fought Now he sits there, writing down his thoughts A pathetic young male, mourning his loss Something is missing, something he doesn't have Why else would every time he tries, he winds up this sad He looks at himself, a broken mess Torn and ripped, rejected at best With one more rhyme, he finished the poem off Submitted the poem, before he logged off
CAPTCHA Preview
Type the characters you see in the picture
Required