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That Perfect Day Became one of my greatest day when me a mother today who has ended nine months of pregnancy waiting for a sign sitting on the rocking chair by the window caressing my baby that was not yet born. Suddenly I felt the first Kick added was a pain an alert that my time was due already prepared with my make up on wearing a beautiful white satin night gown matching the slippers in satin with a white fur rose for decoration as if i wanted already to impress my little baby to be proud of me when his head emerges to see a first image white color as crystal as the water. You my beloved son was born October 18 at 7 30 PM just 2 hours after my entering the hospital as if you decided enough living in hiding for 9 months you want to meet the outside world. You were ready to grow up from day one your personality already formed since you left your mothers womb and that was minutes ago. Nothing was going to slow you from growing fast you wanted to share your future life surrounded by a family that would love you cherish you respect you educate and stand by you through your road of success in your good times and hard times teach you how to walk how to eat how to drink how to dress and grow up to remain faithful to your identify . You took some time to cry out loud but you were strong and persistent in wanting to start living your cry echoing in the delivery room was heard as a sigh of relief born today a baby boy at last free from darkness and loneliness on that clear perfect day. You were ready to celebrate your birth begging the doctor to place your head on your mamas bosom to rest in peace. A mother and child's first encounter love and adoration was in the air. Your tiny mouth searching for the source of your feeding sessions over the coming month's. Your eyes staring at that woman me your mother and in that look was already a thankful note. Your tiny fingers moved caressing my lips with a warm touch a re assuring smile made me forgot my pains as i embraced you while my eyes were a blur from tears of happiness. Between us it was love at first sight i was overwhelmed by your beauty in my inside emotions they were startled by what i sensed my sixth sense created in me an overflowing brightness that overcame any dark areas that might have existed before you were born. You brought out my outside beauty and richness in my inner soul my spirits were flying everywhere dancing like a ballerina which reached her climax of success by being applauded by the audience. Oh! that perfect day when you were born. Oh! how much i had hopes to grow up together hand in hand and pour all my good values by educating you to become a success and never to stop loving you as my son. And you did. I never ever will stop loving you & that perfect day is engraved in my heart. The Mother Contest of Dan Kearly 1/3/13 "One Of My Greatest Days Therese Bacha That Perfect Day." Win. No.1
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