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Another day Another pair of eyes Depression is sulking you Well words for a bloody deal I don't i can deal with you anymore But im making sure the rest see who you really are Now let's start this story right: 1/21/07 Sara calls me, saying she needs help screaming, saying gunfire is all around her house and jonh is outside, bullets are piercing her windows, so the hood must be at war tonight, i nervously look at the clock and is 1:23a.m. I tell her to stay on the line and im heading there ASAP, running trough my house got the shirt, got the phone, car keys so im on my way, while getting in the car she screams "Help!" I ask what happend, but all i hear is more gunshots but banging closer to the phone, im at 102mph and the highway is so lonlie, so i know the devil must have a plan for us all this dark early morning, so im closer now, as soon as i see the entrance of her street i see flashing lights from one side to the other, i made a choice, i just need to get to the other side, so i accelerated and passed in the middle catching all bullets spraying side by side, but im here, carefully i get out of my car and run the the door of her apartment, i see blood on the living room, kitchen made dust with bullets, so i slowly walk to her room and i open the door, her massacre body laying on the right side of bed, blood paints the white walls red, my eyes gaze upon my friends corpse but a click made me think were is jonh? So i grabbed a knife and ran outside, gansters coming from the front side so run to the back, there i was impact by a bullet in the back, so i fell, crawling for safety another strikes my right arm, not much strenght, i turn and hold tightly the knife with my left hand, when i raise my eyes to see who is my murderer i see jonh with a red hoddie, so he betrayed us all, he points his gun to my left arm and Boom! I looked at him and asked why... He responded: When a man see's the truth and makes a deal with the devil for achieving glory, he takes down anyone and anything just to touch truth once...I closed my eyes and open them again and i see the devil besides him with a black cane, smile is pretty deep, so jonh pointed his gun to my head, now is a good bye, BOOM! So now cold embrace my body in a second while flames drag me to hell, i can see now, he wanted to us all, for truth, so truth he found, but im not ready to die yet, shhh! Bips ring my hears, im in a hospital, tubed down troath, i see im not ready, but jonh is, i'll hunt you down, friend.
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