Touched by you

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Touched by the sun warmth is around, touched by your presence, my heart wants to discover... Tears slipping from my face when you are far, wide smiles cross my life when you are near. In this world of sins, I don't need anything, but you, take your hand by the sea, worth more than a gold mine. Listen to your heart beating, is the best song to my ears. Touched by love, means I can fly without wings.

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 5/8/2024 4:45:00 PM

oh, this is such an exquisite and tender love poem, Maria! I loved these words: Listen to your heart beating, is the best song to my ears. Touched by love, means I can fly without wings. They remind me of how I feel with my hubby, Bill. I appreciate you sharing your feelings via this poem. Have a splendid evening, hugs, Sara

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 5/9/2024 12:40:00 AM

Thank you my dear Sara for all your lovely words. I'm happy you feel that with your Bill. I hope he is well. Have a blessed day you both!

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 5/8/2024 2:05:00 PM

Hi Maria :-) Well enjoyed romantic read! Have a nice time!

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 5/8/2024 2:35:00 PM

Thank you so much my dear Abdullah. I hope you have a nice evening!