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In gardens fair, where colors bloom, Petunias dance in whispered grace, Their vibrant hues dispel the gloom. With petals soft as velvet plume, They weave a tale of love's embrace, In gardens fair, where colors bloom. In golden light, their beauty looms, A symphony of charm and space, Their vibrant hues dispel the gloom. Amidst the breeze, they gently groom, Each delicate curve, each fragile lace, In gardens fair, where colors bloom. They banish shadows, chase the doom, Their essence, a divine solace, Their vibrant hues dispel the gloom. Oh, petunias, in sweet perfume, Your presence, a celestial trace, In gardens fair, where colors bloom, Your vibrant hues dispel the gloom.

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Date: 5/15/2024 8:37:00 PM
A beautiful poem on petunia, Jay. A fave for me.
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Date: 5/8/2024 12:16:00 PM
This is a wonderful use of the form.. Your poem is full of beautiful imagery and colours..
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Date: 5/8/2024 8:06:00 AM
Love this. I think petunias are so symbolic of summer. I agree that they dispel gloom. My joy continues after reading your poem.
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Date: 5/7/2024 4:13:00 PM
An absolutely lovely Villanella praising the beauty of petunias, one of my favorite flowers. I especially liked these lines, for I found them spot on and captivating: Oh, petunias, in sweet perfume, Your presence, a celestial trace, In gardens fair, where colors bloom, Your vibrant hues dispel the gloom. Have a pleasant evening, hugs, Sara
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Date: 5/7/2024 4:00:00 PM
Awesome rhymes and cadence Jay. My wife loves all flowers, especially hibiscus
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Date: 5/7/2024 1:33:00 PM
Your "Petunia" is a beautiful write for a beautiful flower. Great Picture... Have a blessed day................
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Date: 5/7/2024 10:40:00 AM
Jay, your poetry is always worthy of being read, and always enjoyed.
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Date: 5/7/2024 10:18:00 AM
what an absolutely beautiful villanelle, I love petunias and their vibrant colours:-) hugs Jan xx
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