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For Intro "Poi"-Etry Poetry Contest

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New Come to me Now my dear Bride to be Nothing to fear Early love balloons Year after year Birth hummed tunes When we’re free Our garden blooms.

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Date: 5/15/2024 6:21:00 AM
Sweet romantic poi-etry Rick. I've seen photos of your wife. Awesome couple
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/18/2024 7:33:00 AM
Congratulations!
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Tom Woody
Date: 5/15/2024 6:24:00 AM
We'll hit 31 in December
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/15/2024 6:22:00 AM
Thanks Tom. I feel blessed to have shared 31 years with her.
Date: 5/13/2024 8:45:00 PM
Awwwww... blooming gardens. So much can be understood from those two words. Lovely. Thanks for your visit to me poem. Richard, I also love people. Have no fear...I haven't gone off the deep end quite yet.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/13/2024 10:11:00 PM
I have no doubt you love people. Hugs Rick.
Date: 5/10/2024 7:23:00 PM
Delightful poetry Richard, lovey dovey romantico… Beryl
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/13/2024 10:10:00 PM
Thanks Beryl.
Date: 5/9/2024 4:23:00 PM
The serene romanticism of this poem hugs to the heart. I enjoy the eternal spoken joy.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/9/2024 5:01:00 PM
Thanks so much.
Date: 5/9/2024 8:47:00 AM
Hello Richard, What a beautiful love poem! Repeating "year after year" creates a sense of timeless love. "Early love balloons" is such a sweet image, and the final line, "Our garden blooms," perfectly captures the growth and joy of your love. - Blessings, Daniel
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/9/2024 5:02:00 PM
Thanks for your poignant comment.
Date: 5/8/2024 4:51:00 PM
lovely read and a great contest contender. I just liked this poem :-) enjoy your evening, Sara
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/9/2024 6:16:00 AM
Thanks Sara. I’m pleased you like my poem.
Date: 5/8/2024 2:36:00 PM
what a sweet romantic poem Rick:-) hope you and your 'sweetie' are well:-) I so miss my correspondence with mama bear she was such a lovely lady:-) hugs Jan xx
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/9/2024 6:18:00 AM
I miss her too. Especially at this time of year, with Mother’s Day, her birthday and the time of her passing. Thanks for the hug and visit.
Date: 5/8/2024 1:06:00 PM
So beautiful and heartfelt. A very sincere poem that flows with such tender love! Pleasure reading this romantic poem. Sending you light always
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/9/2024 6:19:00 AM
I appreciate the light and your visit.
Date: 5/8/2024 8:50:00 AM
Very romantic my friend. Hugs Eve
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/8/2024 9:13:00 AM
Thanks. It was a challenging one to write. I hope I got the form right.

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