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I See Tremors

I see tremors… dancing between the dust, as the sunlight hits your hands, they recite their symphony, of silence, for me… from a distant land.

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Hilda Greenhough

Date: 5/8/2024 6:25:00 AM

I enjoy this lovely poem. I like the sense of an endless eternity. That strikes a finality to these words.

Kate Davies
Date: 5/9/2024 11:58:00 PM

Thank you Hilda, I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 5/7/2024 8:46:00 AM

Dear Kate, In this delicate moment, a symphony of silence unfolds, whispering secrets from a distant land. Your poetic vision warmly invites us to contemplate the beauty of nature's subtle movements and the profound connections between worlds. Through your verse, you artistically captured the essence of a fleeting yet profound experience, inviting pause, listen, and appreciate the whispers of the universe. Wonderful poem! - Blessings, Daniel

Kate Davies
Date: 5/9/2024 11:58:00 PM

Thank you Daniel, there is beauty all around when you keep an open eye :)