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Circling Graphite

When silence speaks Nothing is heard. Our breathe is a like a secret Window, hotly working. You squinting at a friend and Trying not to giggle. Or writing long exams in a room With circling graphite, Scantron sheet after scantron sheet. Or in Mass, The death knell of silliness, Leave or lose your wind bag. Or in your mind, Be still your mind. This is the fifteenth line. Please be still your mind.

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Date: 5/16/2024 7:52:00 AM
an interesting piece, with good use of pared down language - congrats on your placement in craig's contest, and thanks for your comment on mine
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Matt Caliri
Date: 5/16/2024 4:12:00 PM
It was my pleasure, Lady Puddifoot!
Date: 5/13/2024 2:52:00 PM
Interesting winner. Congratulations. Sara K
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