Revise Poems - Poems about Revise

The Plump needs Enduring Exercise To Excess Weight shed and check size, I tell you: need to questions ask For a just confronted task; Navigator’s Compass arrange For voyage that over seas range: Your two legs straighten and back arch Ahead of a circuitous March; For The Anonymous Caller, Calm Ears of one who is taller, Priming them for Threats or Shy Love...

Continue reading...

Poe was always revising his prose between publications. Here are the longest extended versions of sentences he shortened for their final publication in his lifetime: "We loved each other with a love that was more than love, more love than fit in an empty grotes bag, more than the love of worms if you were a...

Continue reading...

Do you out there in the darkness revise your work? I usually do Rhyme once rules Not in these days Some prefer the old style of poetry Some enjoy modern work Some like poetry of their ethnic group Like some like novels of their ethnic group I have read work of other ethnic groups Or not? I know some Hebrew, a...

Continue reading...

“Hey guys how are your wives?” The second friend replies “My wife is an angel.” ‘I’m sorry that’s awful’ The third rises his hand for a high five saying, “Lucky, mines still alive.” The Original First guy (proudly): "My wife's an angel!" Second guy: "You're lucky, mine's still alive. Is not my joke. I cannot give credit to anyone. Google it for...

Continue reading...

TRYING TO REVISE FOR ANCIENT HISTORY EXAM What if Darius had beaten Alexander? The outcome would have been a mystery Such supposing makes me wonder About the blank unwritten pages of history Scan the book and each dog-eared leaf Try to recall why some words are yellow Search the notes in my untidy sheaf I’m a casual-sower/chaotic-harvester fellow I should...

Continue reading...

correcting mistakes isn't always that easy sometimes they've been missed...

Continue reading...

Revise, revise. Rewrite, rewrite. Marketing, marketing, marketing. If you're in search of fortune, It seems a price to pay. It goes against nearly everything when speaking to the muse. Stare starlit-- the moon's not far behind. Give yourself permission. To eat broccoli And love it. Roll in the snow naked. Walk like the turtle And travel by bus....

Continue reading...