Free Advice To Freely Revise
The Plump needs Enduring Exercise
To Excess Weight shed and check size,
I tell you: need to questions ask
For a just confronted task;
Navigator’s Compass arrange
For voyage that over seas range:
Your two legs straighten and back arch
Ahead of a circuitous March;
For The Anonymous Caller,
Calm Ears of one who is taller,
Priming them for Threats or Shy Love
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Categories:
revise, imagination, perspective, wisdom, words,
Form: Rhyme
If Poe Failed To Revise
Poe was always revising his prose between publications. Here are the longest extended versions of sentences he shortened for their final publication in his lifetime:
"We loved each other with a love that was more than love, more love than fit in an empty grotes bag, more than the love of worms if you were a
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Categories:
revise, cat, fantasy, horror, humor,
Form: Prose Poetry
Revise
Do you out there in the darkness revise your work?
I usually do
Rhyme once rules
Not in these days
Some prefer the old style of poetry
Some enjoy modern work
Some like poetry of their ethnic group
Like some like novels of their ethnic group
I have read work of other ethnic groups
Or not?
I know some Hebrew, a
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Categories:
revise, poetry, poets,
Form: Blank verse
A Revise Joke :P
“Hey guys how are your wives?”
The second friend replies
“My wife is an angel.”
‘I’m sorry that’s awful’
The third rises his hand for a high five
saying, “Lucky, mines still alive.”
The Original
First guy (proudly): "My wife's an angel!"
Second guy: "You're lucky, mine's still alive.
Is not my joke. I cannot give credit to anyone. Google it for
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Categories:
revise, funny, humor, marriage,
Form: I do not know?
Trying To Revise For Ancient History Exam
TRYING TO REVISE FOR ANCIENT HISTORY EXAM
What if Darius had beaten Alexander?
The outcome would have been a mystery
Such supposing makes me wonder
About the blank unwritten pages of history
Scan the book and each dog-eared leaf
Try to recall why some words are yellow
Search the notes in my untidy sheaf
I’m a casual-sower/chaotic-harvester fellow
I should
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Categories:
revise, history,
Form: Quatrain
Revise Revise Revise
correcting mistakes
isn't always that easy
sometimes they've been missed
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Categories:
revise, write,
Form: Haiku
How To Revise a Poem?
Revise, revise.
Rewrite, rewrite.
Marketing, marketing, marketing.
If you're in search of fortune,
It seems a price to pay.
It goes against nearly
everything
when speaking to the muse.
Stare starlit--
the moon's not far behind.
Give yourself permission.
To eat broccoli
And love it.
Roll in the snow naked.
Walk like the turtle
And travel by bus.
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Categories:
revise, children, funny, happiness,
Form: Blank verse