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Women Bartender Parties Their eyes watched the bartender, like a tennis ball, volleying to each side, bouncing, soft like from side to side of the bar, filling drinks and old men's hearts with wet dreams, prompting the men on gathering closer to the campfire. She was hot. Their necks stretched, minds made pseudo claims, and mouths watered of her effect. She was young and new, and too studious. A librarian by day, layers of academia, flowing through her veins- you could see that she was smart, yet sassy. There was no hiding, though, the biker girl behind those glasses, hair in a bun, and brass demeanor. She made sashay look pedestrian. She could compete with a New York model with her providence, long arms and legs, and a longer neck, that likely sprung a gasket in her admirers. Would she lie? When she gained wind of whispering old men, poking the shortness of her denim shorts she tickled their fancies. "Is my vagina sticking out," as she checked her shorts, innocence oozing from her and sending old men's watering hole to rise. She was a frolicking horse that put all the other bar's bartenders to pasture. She continued pouring drinks, like how pouring rain- rescues drought stricken crops. She had that effect. When she saddled next to an old man, lucky one at that, her gray eyes boring into his browns, as they split the night air into little gifts, exchanging presents of knowledge of each other, you could see his horses neighing, too, nudging to get out of the stables. Did she say she was writing a book? He doesn't remember. He remembers seeing a moon flower. She continued serving rain, while the jukebox played and the patrons swayed, exchanging banter with each. Moments later she did the unthinkable-no it wasn't a red scarlet. Or connotative. She drank, which is taboo, matching shots of Royal, three, with the old man, while not missing a beat, holding her liquor well, and turning back his hands ............. of time. connie pachecho 4/20/17

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Date: 5/12/2017 7:07:00 PM
Bars are temples of various types. Ah, the wonders therein...
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Date: 4/25/2017 11:26:00 AM
Is this the witch who is bothering you? Just block the pathetic poeticule and keep writing. She's not even worth a second look... I like your piece. I see some word play that just tangos with the reader.
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Connie Pachecho
Date: 4/25/2017 12:56:00 PM
Cyndi. Wait a second. There's something you said that hits home. I can't say. The other one would know.
Date: 4/22/2017 11:10:00 PM
hahahhahahaha mind your own business, please do just that and stop to bully others.
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Bartholomew Schmek
Date: 5/13/2017 10:42:00 AM
Not bad for an 8 year old. Not good, either.
Date: 4/22/2017 11:07:00 PM
You cant write, give up, Marc here always supports those who cant write, you are a good bully and terrible poet. Why do you harass so many others? You are like Trump a liar and fake.
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Bartholomew Schmek
Date: 5/13/2017 10:41:00 AM
Lame trolling. Connie, you can block childish people like this. That includes their mentally-compromised sidekick Frank.
Date: 4/20/2017 3:32:00 AM
Great write, flow and visuals well blended ...x??
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