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Winter Slumber

season of rolling horizons holding life beyond what we see when winter hangs in bare trees silver branches bedding down in a hangover of lost green beyond city limits, forests fall into slumber waiting for a seasonal flip to loosen the grip of cold huff and puffed winds cocooning one to a protective box the hold of a robust time that loves its own white ruin in this air of frigid authority, my life of reading to snoozing a peaceful indifference like the weightlessness of wooing free of complications I have a soft spot for thoughts that drift to the mundane like a lost mitten in the snow maybe I'll keep the bedroom door shut and locked till a warming April sun knocks its intrusion slicing open a greener terrain a garden that asks for seeding for now, in these darkening days shadows, like mob rule, carry their own power readying slumber folded in the margins of my book its script of possibilities

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Date: 2/14/2024 5:48:00 AM
In a way I can relate to this expressive poem, Brian; I can't stand cold and dull weather, and I look forward to spring / summer. Of course, I don't get it as bad as you do, since my temperate Mediterranean weather is kinder to me! ~ Regards // paul
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 3/12/2024 2:39:00 PM
Hi Paul, Thanks very much for your stop by + comment. I envy your temperate Mediterranean climate, though we haven't had much snow or severe cold this winter. Global warming I suppose. Be well. Brian
Date: 2/7/2024 9:10:00 AM
I think this is a wonderful winter slumber read! Write a book! Congratulations on your win, Brian!
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 2/7/2024 9:57:00 AM
Thank you for your most encouraging words, Anaya. I hope all is well with you. Brian
Date: 2/6/2024 7:50:00 AM
Dear Brian, Looks like ive read this before but i didnt remember the poem as i read so many a day. However all that which id like to say seems to have been said in comments, and im so glad that you entered this poem to my contest. Congratulations on your well deserved win!
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 2/6/2024 8:18:00 AM
Thanks very much, ink Empress, for seeing merit in my poem. After 2 NA's I was wondering if I should just hit the delete button + remove the posting. My intention was to move from an external world heavy with winter slumber to that of a bedroom cocooning. But I am not much for adjective overload in composition, so my more image based poems often find no favor. With appreciation for the recognition, Brian
Date: 1/14/2024 8:41:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your talent with us by posting this fine work. I appreciate the visit to my page with congratulations as well. Sara K
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 1/16/2024 8:05:00 AM
Hello Sara, Thank you for thoughtful message. My posting here, however, was an NA in 2 recent contests. I may revise the piece. Take care of yourself. Best wishes, Brian
Date: 1/7/2024 5:19:00 PM
I appreciate the need for cocooning during winter. I liked this line: "I have a soft spot for thought that drift to the mundane..." I do that more so in the winter. If you wrote this for the contest, best wishes with this poem. Have a cozy winter :-) Sara
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 1/7/2024 5:27:00 PM
Happy New Year Sara. I hope that you and Bill are well. Our recent snowfall has made cocooning more attractive than ever. Thank you for your stop by and best wishes for my contest submission (though I don't have high hopes). Sincerest regards always, Brian
Date: 1/6/2024 10:06:00 PM
Script of possibilities. Ah your way with expressing and delivering thoughts during winter is so very creative. I love the flow of this dear Brian, and how you’ve articulated so many lines in this and how seamless your word weaving is. I especially love the lines “ I have a soft spot for thoughts that drift to the mundan like a lost mitten in the snow” love that line! “ this is my theatre of shadows, thinly veiled my slumber folded in the margins of a book“ exquisite ending! A fave for me! BOL
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 1/7/2024 6:51:00 AM
Greetings Ink Empress, My appreciation for your thoughtful views on my posting. With snow now in full force, winter's push to our slumber is a good reason to cocoon inside. Thank you again for your most supportive words. Brian
Date: 1/6/2024 8:28:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this nice work, really enjoyed the imagery in here
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 1/6/2024 9:22:00 PM
Thank you Arastu. I appreciate your stop by + encouraging words. I hope all is well with you. Brian

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