Winter Slumber

rolling horizons season
holding life beyond what we see
when winter hangs in bare trees
silver branches bedding down in a hangover of lost green

beyond city limits, forests fall into slumber
waiting for a seasonal flip to loosen the grip of cold
huff and puffed winds cocooning one to a protective box
the hold of a robust time that loves its own white ruin

in this air of frigid authority, my life of reading to snoozing
a peaceful indifference like the weightlessness of wooing
free of complications 

I have a soft spot for thoughts that drift to the mundane
                       like a lost mitten in the snow
maybe I'll keep the bedroom door shut and locked
             till a warming April sun knocks its intrusion
             slicing open a greener terrain
             a garden that asks for seeding

for now, in these darkening days
shadows, like mob rule, carry their own power
readying slumber 
folded in the margins of my book
its script of possibilities
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Callus Avatar
February 14, 2024 at 5:48 AM
In a way I can relate to this expressive poem, Brian; I can't stand cold and dull weather, and I look forward to spring / summer. Of course, I don't get it as bad as you do, since my temperate Mediterranean weather is kinder to me! ~ Regards // paul
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March 12, 2024 at 2:39 PM
Hi Paul, Thanks very much for your stop by + comment. I envy your temperate Mediterranean climate, though we haven't had much snow or severe cold this winter. Global warming I suppose. Be well. Brian
Anaya Avatar
February 7, 2024 at 9:10 AM
I think this is a wonderful winter slumber read! Write a book! Congratulations on your win, Brian!
Sambourne Avatar
February 7, 2024 at 9:57 AM
Thank you for your most encouraging words, Anaya. I hope all is well with you. Brian
Empress Avatar
February 6, 2024 at 7:50 AM
Dear Brian, Looks like ive read this before but i didnt remember the poem as i read so many a day. However all that which id like to say seems to have been said in comments, and im so glad that you entered this poem to my contest. Congratulations on your well deserved win!
Sambourne Avatar
February 6, 2024 at 8:18 AM
Thanks very much, ink Empress, for seeing merit in my poem. After 2 NA's I was wondering if I should just hit the delete button + remove the posting. My intention was to move from an external world heavy with winter slumber to that of a bedroom cocooning. But I am not much for adjective overload in composition, so my more image based poems often find no favor. With appreciation for the recognition, Brian
Kendrick Avatar
January 14, 2024 at 8:41 AM
Thank you for sharing your talent with us by posting this fine work. I appreciate the visit to my page with congratulations as well. Sara K
Sambourne Avatar
January 16, 2024 at 8:05 AM
Hello Sara, Thank you for thoughtful message. My posting here, however, was an NA in 2 recent contests. I may revise the piece. Take care of yourself. Best wishes, Brian
Empress Avatar
January 6, 2024 at 10:06 PM
Script of possibilities. Ah your way with expressing and delivering thoughts during winter is so very creative. I love the flow of this dear Brian, and how you’ve articulated so many lines in this and how seamless your word weaving is. I especially love the lines “ I have a soft spot for thoughts that drift to the mundan like a lost mitten in the snow” love that line! “ this is my theatre of shadows, thinly veiled my slumber folded in the margins of a book“ exquisite ending! A fave for me! BOL
Sambourne Avatar
January 7, 2024 at 6:51 AM
Greetings Ink Empress, My appreciation for your thoughtful views on my posting. With snow now in full force, winter's push to our slumber is a good reason to cocoon inside. Thank you again for your most supportive words. Brian
Goyal Avatar
January 6, 2024 at 8:28 PM
Enjoyed reading this nice work, really enjoyed the imagery in here
Sambourne Avatar
January 6, 2024 at 9:22 PM
Thank you Arastu. I appreciate your stop by + encouraging words. I hope all is well with you. Brian
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