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Wildfire Premiere Contest Winner

~ As embers cast their seedlings to the tide, relentless rants of endless acrid winds attenuate the brittle countryside, releasing spite, as hopelessness descends. Scorching plumes infuse a septic, swirling, noxious residue into the feral timberlands, unleashing toxic, whirling clouds of grimace, rendering them sterile. The Devil's rage holds taut the torrid brush that strokes the bramble sage with streaks of fire, salvation chokes upon this lethal blush as Hell provokes the cinders of its pyre. The searing wrath leaves silence in its stride as embers cast their seedlings to the tide. Contest Host: Mark Toney Marathon Poetry Contest Date Written 5-15-22

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Date: 6/19/2022 12:14:00 PM
Powerfully done. Enjoyed. God bless you . Congrats. Love, Gina
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Date: 6/15/2022 12:11:00 PM
Dear Mark, the intense metaphorical and lilting rhythmic beauty of your sonnet is exceptional! Your imagery is exquisite in its lethal charm upon the senses. Congratulations for your excellent and well deserved trophy win In Mark's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 6/15/2022 9:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a Sonnet write. Have a blessed day writing away.................
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Date: 6/14/2022 11:35:00 PM
Such mastery of imagery and power-packed word selection, Mark. Wonderful sonnet writing, very impressive and an excellent choice for #1 spot in mile 1. Hope to see more of your gems on the upcoming winner lists ~ John
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Date: 6/14/2022 10:12:00 PM
Amazing presentation of the tongues of flames turning everything into ash and cinders causing desultory devastation! Congratulations on your trophy win, Mark
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Date: 6/14/2022 9:49:00 PM
Congratulations, Mark, on your first place win on Mile 1 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon contest. Your highly descriptive sonnet enabled us to see, hear, feel, and even smell and taste the destructive fury of a wildfire. Mile 2 is up and running!
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Date: 6/1/2022 1:26:00 AM
This Orphan Sonnet is stunning in both imagery and actuality. An exquisite example of Dale’s wonderful invented form. I can’t believe it did not make the winning list! My daughter had to leave her home for three days, both dogs and turtle and all, to escape the threat of a fire in Santa Rosa. She was fortunate to have her home safe. Kudos on this brilliant entry Mark. Blessings xxoo
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Mark Massey
Date: 6/1/2022 5:47:00 PM
Thank you Connie
Date: 5/16/2022 9:34:00 PM
Your finely worded sonnet aptly describes the devastation a destructive fire can bring, Mark. I live in Southern California, and have experienced this firsthand. Great poem, sonnet man! Good luck in the contest! :)
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Mark Massey
Date: 5/22/2022 6:01:00 AM
Thanks Laura

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