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Wild Is the Wind

Furious wind from the north hisses louder, banging against the gaped mouth of a sky, drenched… Haggard, the night wheezes with quack of birds waylaid; a time of unruly rainfall crashing once more: and the moon grows bald, groaning a jumble of cracked acoustics: On and on, the roar of sleet pierces through lush trees in a noise that grates far into the dark horizon, an energy fierce like a woman scorned. How she blares a war amidst a company of men, flowers, and all in one driven ride that her wild thrill rasps zooms --- until on ninth hour a slow-motion of rhythm flows, while she pauses to croon a mellow tune as if... in final taps of a wail, nothing ever happened. For Shadow Hamilton:The Noise Contest Written 3/9/2017
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Hamilton Avatar
April 2, 2017 at 5:21 PM
Amazing imagery, and a phraseology that is distinctly you. So well done!
Medders Tobechi Avatar
March 19, 2017 at 2:56 PM
I love the different images you have for the wind and noises and how you bring it to subsiding at the end. Well penned. Congratulations.
Smith Avatar
March 19, 2017 at 8:40 AM
Well done Nette. Congratulations...
Hamilton Avatar
March 19, 2017 at 3:17 AM
Beautiful Nette nice to see you congrats on placing hugs
Konos Avatar
March 17, 2017 at 4:11 PM
As "0nly" Nette Onclaud could say it! Simply Marvelous!
Marie Avatar
March 11, 2017 at 9:58 PM
Wow...what a fierce event! This poem has everything that ignites emotions, right from the start... Weather, high drama, intensity, and as close to 'sound effects' as I have ever encountered while...reading..whew :-) Superb writing skills, this is fantastic nette :-) It's such a treat to read such magnificent writing. A fave, 7++++ many blessings to you :-) lynn
Callus Avatar
March 11, 2017 at 1:55 AM
Excellent use of imagery and personification, Nette! While reading I felt like I was caught in this same storm, but luckily not in the clutches of a scorned woman! #7+ Hugs // paul
Roper Avatar
March 10, 2017 at 11:26 PM
Wow! Wonderful imigary Good luck in the contest hugs Eve~*
Manassian Avatar
March 9, 2017 at 8:28 PM
Wow...you really show the strength of the storm, Nette....like a woman scorned. Amazing imagery throughout this piece. Hugs
Andresen Avatar
March 9, 2017 at 2:34 PM
- A beautiful poem, Nette - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Em Avatar
March 9, 2017 at 11:50 AM
Amazing build-up of sound from crashing, banging to wheezing excellently realized! Faving this sterling poem.
Lindley Avatar
March 9, 2017 at 10:41 AM
I was in that storm while reading this gem.. Aptly descriptive image of my first wife , those verses are. She only marred by her drug addiction.. A fav, a true whale of a poem my friend..
Parker Avatar
March 9, 2017 at 9:57 AM
a storm captured in poetic verse..really well done..good luck
Green Avatar
March 9, 2017 at 9:08 AM
Beautiful Nette, your poetry is something I happy get lost in every time I read. Good luck in the contest.
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