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Wide Open Spaces In my basket of steel and plastic, sole company my personal talking head and Billy Joel reminding me we didn’t start the fire, I bucket along. The highway’s empty this time of night and I am the only planet in the universe oblivious even to its own moon. Breaking seventy-five, my selfsame speed of light, a comet of colored fireworks descends from behind. Stopped in my tire tracks, I am approached by one blue alien. “License and registration please.” Don’t think and drive. ©Kathryn McLoughlin Collins December 31, 2011

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/25/2012 11:32:00 AM
Totally unique, and captivating! '...basket of steel and plastic,' '...oblivious even to its own moon.' I love your use of language, and your imagery... Love, Keith :)
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Date: 3/29/2012 8:42:00 AM
congrats on your featured poem of the week
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Date: 3/29/2012 8:34:00 AM
Enjoyed you write - congratulations on your feature.
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Date: 3/28/2012 6:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your premium featured write this week kATHRYN. Love, Carol
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Kathryn Collins
Date: 3/28/2012 9:02:00 AM
Thanks Carol. I didn't know it was there. love, Kathy
Date: 3/26/2012 9:53:00 AM
Thanks Dave.
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Date: 3/26/2012 9:20:00 AM
Pursued by reality. How unfortunate. These cops have a way of bringing a person down to earth. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Date: 3/26/2012 6:50:00 AM
Wonderful poem and congrats on feature............Patrick
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Kathryn Collins
Date: 3/28/2012 9:02:00 AM
Glad you liked. love, Kathy
Date: 2/9/2012 10:20:00 PM
Hey, I really like this. I especially enjoyed Billy Joel reference. I like his music, too. And the play of words is really well done, good turning of phrases, here. Thanks for the sweet comments on my poem! How are you making out on the soup? Comfortable with how everything works. For the longest time I didn't know how to soup mail someone. I'd have to wait till they soupmailed me. Have you stopped by blogs yet? It isn't everyones cup of tea, but some enjoy the chatter, too! Goodnight, :-) Cyndi
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Kathryn Collins
Date: 2/10/2012 8:26:00 AM
Thanks Cyndi - doesn't take much to confuse me, but I'm plodding along. I'm building a list of favorites. I thought that may make things more manageable. I'm far from blogs yet, still trying to read and write. I love it here. love, Kathy
Date: 1/30/2012 9:25:00 AM
Clever work here - I especially like the reference to that intresting Billy Joel song. Peace and Love Matthew Anish
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Kathryn Collins
Date: 1/30/2012 11:10:00 AM
Thanks Matthew. You never know when the wide open road is not what it seems. appreciate the comment. love, kathy
Date: 1/26/2012 9:43:00 AM
Excellent Kathryn. A humorous depiction of the joys and tribulations of driving alone. I really like the way you write. Thanks for the smile. Rockman :-)
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Kathryn Collins
Date: 1/30/2012 11:11:00 AM
Hi Rockman. Makes me so happy that you like my writing. Kathy
Date: 1/7/2012 3:00:00 PM
Enjoyed your poem very much. It gave me a chuckle. Love, Kim
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Kathryn Collins
Date: 1/8/2012 7:51:00 AM
Thank you Kim. It is so encouraging to get your feedback. love, Kathy

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