White Cotton Sacks

The old stone gristmill stood like a monolith, its massive wooden wheel creaking and turning dipping into the swift waters of a dammed-up creek. Inside, everything was covered in a fine white dust amidst a cacophony of cogs, gears, and pulleys. Most notably, there was a giant granite stone that turned, crushing grain into powder. It was a dangerous place for kids to be, we weren't allowed to hang around the workings. Pa and all of the neighboring farmers brought bushels of wheat there to be milled, keeping the miller busy filling white cotton sacks with flour. A pond adjacent to the mill fueled its workings, and we'd gather on its banks for picnic lunches. As kids, we'd be allowed to swim or fish while pa and the other men did all the work. In my mind's eye, I see him dusted white as a ghost, exchanging smiles while sharing a joke with the miller. Today you can only imagine what it was like, for it now only exists in dreams or picture shows. It was a time that time will never repeat, when farmers gathered at the gristmill as both a necessity and a communal event.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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George   Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 9:17 AM
Yes! An era lost to time. Great writing Emile. Many congrats on your win. Elaine.
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June 22, 2018 at 11:24 AM
Thanks Elaine, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
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June 22, 2018 at 6:55 AM
Congratulations on your win with this well-written poem. Great imagery.
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June 22, 2018 at 11:23 AM
Thanks Susan, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
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June 18, 2018 at 9:26 PM
Congratulations Emile. Tom
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June 20, 2018 at 12:41 PM
Thanks Tom, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
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May 31, 2018 at 2:38 PM
Awesome poem, Emile.
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June 1, 2018 at 8:51 AM
Thank you Line, I appreciate your visits my friend, Emile.
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